love your story love to read more keep up the good work

Please keep going! I'm a mega Carnage fan and I can tell I'm gonna love it when it's done!

I'm happy to see that you've started writing another story. And can say with confidence that this looks promising. I find all of your other OC's (Mary and Lily) very convincing and entertaining, not only that but you write them well. You give them a humanity that I find very easy to connect with.
Anyway, in short, nice job, keep it up.
P.S.
Are you still continuing with "The Architect"?