I saw that Dr. Who reference... Don't act like you don't know! Whose your favorite doctor I wonder?
-TheBEASTisnear

Maccready is alive in Fallout 4 so might have to retain his death if you want to,do a story for it

A nice wee addition to the fallout universe. I like how you've integrated 3 and NV. Cheers.

Have I mentioned that you are an amazing author? I don't think I've mentioned that enough. Hope to see what you come up with next!

I would like to tell you something. Even though i'm reading this fic 2 years after you wrote them they (as a collective set) are one of my top 5 fanfics. your a fucking fantastic.

I'm going to give this as a review of all three of your fics as I am lazy and don't feel like going back to the others, lol. Who knows, I might do it anyway. You deserve it.

First off, you are one of the most talented writers I've ever seen. Your ability to keep parallelism running in your stories, and by that I mean having several characters all performing important tasks without taking away from the rest of the story or contradicting anything else in it, is of a high caliber. The only time which I caught you slipping on parallelism is on the last chapter of this fic, when Leon showed up and responded to the gloating Leader with "And the same goes for you too!" Leon should not have known what the Leader said, since he was not implanted with the language translation thingy. That being said, that is the only mistake I saw in all of your fallout writing and for that, I commend you.

Secondly, your grammar is excellent. I've been turned off by many other works in the past due to bad grammar, and I'm glad to see that some people feel the same way as I do about its importance.

Now, about your actual stories; The first of your fics was great, but I felt as if you were a little shaky with your characters, as if you weren't confident with how you wrote them and weren't sure where the story was going. But as the story continued on, your writing became less shaky, and when you introduced the OCs, I fell in love with them. You pulled off an amazing plot and set up to the second story.

The second story, in my opinion, was the best of the three, and probably one of my favorite fanfictions of all time. Not only was your plot amazingly well put together, but your character writing was exponentially more confident than the first story. I could imagine each of the characters actually saying most of the things you wrote, and your OCs were incredible. The Courier and the Lone Wanderer were excellently portrayed. I was a little skeptical about the arrival of alien tech, but your area 51 explanation was really good, and the conclusion to the story was truly amazing. I sincerely cannot give you higher compliments.

As for your third story, I was a little put off by it at first. Everything just seemed to be conveniently falling into place, such as Amata getting captured, Leon's ship not being there to see the new Zeta ship, Jaden being captured already, etc. But you managed to completely change my opinion towards the end as all of this becomes explained and more. I consider your story behind the Zeta as one of the best explanations for them, too. The conclusion of this story was beyond satisfactory, and again, I command you.

I was so hooked on your writings that I read all three today, lol. Also, I look forward to any future writings you may do about the Courier and the Lone Wanderer, although I couldn't think of many future encounters myself, unless you go off of Jaden's dream and go all Hellboy on us, lol.

Keep up the good work!

I cant wait for the next fic! Btw courier & lucy west? That would be awsome...

Cool bro, nice ending, now you made the last part f this episode abit of a cliff hanger didn't you? So now my question is, what's next

hmmm (brushes beard) interesting ending, (gasp) is it another crossover?

Brilliant work. A bit shorter than the others, but anyways it was enjoyable as the first two were.

Should have something like the MW-BoS from Chicago and the Legion or something.

Cool :D I love this series so much :D
I'm looking forward to the next story, but I can't guess for the life of me what its about, your hint is so vague :p
This chapter seems to be a lot more like your better work :)

Way to end that story. You definitely gave me the vibe of a horror film of some kind or another.

When's the next one?

why am I getting oblivion crisis vibes here? sounds awesome

Cass and the courier, oh and please update.