| Reviews for Dragon's Heart |
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   Honey b33 chapter 14 . 3/18/2018 Loving the tale so far! Mind you, Hawke’s not very good at the whole survival thing |
| UnderLust-Sins chapter 14 . 7/12/2016 Blood of a Hawke...remembering Bethany is safe in your storyline, these blood mages could go after HER too since she's Hawke's sister and daughter of Malcom Hawke. this is gonna get interesting~ |
| AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 9/27/2015 I like it. Very good job. |
| 5 Coloured Walker chapter 14 . 3/29/2015 Your beta [Who you mentioned often before] sucks, and your chapters are riddled with errors. That aside, while I don't necessarily think that much of the plot at some points, this is a good story, I look forward to more. If/When you update, I'll give you a nitpick list so you can edit. |
| aeuny chapter 11 . 2/14/2015 I really enjoy this story in terms of plot and pacing. I love stories involving Kossith, especially the Arishok. However, the tense and form errors that are common to a lot of verbs in each chapter are very confusing and distracting. It really started to bug me after some chapters. I would recommend having a beta read over your work? Keep up the good work! Looking forward to more chapters. |
| KeiraPhenix chapter 13 . 1/19/2015 The grammar was a tad confusing, but not too difficult to work through. Then again, I read Shakespeare once because I was bored... |
| FaeSong chapter 12 . 1/15/2015 This is such a unique story. I love seeing the Arishok's character explored. The Qunari are a favorite of mine in the Dragon Age world, and I think you are writing them wonderfully. I can't wait to see more. |
| HermioneSnape4eva chapter 12 . 1/12/2015 Need more Arishok! |
| Ahsli-Ahni chapter 11 . 8/15/2014 I really like this story, I cant wait for more！！！！！ |
| Ms.Bloodmoon chapter 11 . 5/11/2014 Amazinggggg story! It is go bloody good I cannot even describe in words how much I adore it! Minor errors with present, past, and future tense, but my brain automatically flips the word that is incorrect to the proper...wording...? Either way, love it! Keep up the phenomenal work! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/9/2014 I hope you haven't abandoned this story. It's very interesting, I like it very much. Also I think you deserve much more reviews. Please update! |
| Kyoki no Megami chapter 11 . 3/18/2014 haifisch; i love your story so far xD some small grammar mistakes, though. i wonder why you've got only 7 reviews - even more so with 63 followers. well that aside i hope you plan on continuing soon kyoki no megami maDAlexa |
| Nameless-Sinner chapter 9 . 11/13/2013 Awesome chapter. Thanks for updating. |
| jannah chapter 8 . 10/18/2013 Loving this story! One of the better arishok/hawke pairings i have read. Look forward to more! |
| Nevalia chapter 8 . 9/1/2013 I love your story so far, please update soon. |
