This was a pretty good/ funny story, and it really made me feel like I was on Isle Delfino! Super Mario Sunshine is my favorite Mario game, so I'm glad to see a cool fanfiction about it! Keep up the good work!

Yay! you finally gave Birdo some emotion and she finally got to talk without sighing and shaking her head! Birdo is my fav Mario character actually...

If there's one thing I like/appreciate about your fics, is that in one way or another, they're all connected.

Durians and watermelons really were sensitive to any interaction with Mario or .D.D. water, yes. Lucky for Mario that there is no fruit lady that wanted huge watermelons.

How did the Toads get into the toxic river level? Can Toads ride Yoshis?