Very great!

Max coming to check over Logan in his sleep after he was coming back in his chair is really my prefered plot.

You bring Johndy on it with a surprising good idea! I like seeing Bling acting much more fiercely than Logan to keep his girl!

You write about Zack very right like I saw him.

I'm so happy to have read it just as it was all posted, your A/N telling me that I would probably tired you to post if I was reading that in '02 and 03' !

Thank you for this beautifull story.

(did I already warning you? Don't remember. If not: sorry for my english, I'm working on it. If yes: sorry to insist!)

Love the sweet fluffy M/L goodness, though not loving the spelling and grammar mistakes.

Feels like there should be more chaps to this-are you going to write more?

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING STORY! I love the plot and all, but it needs work in the spelling and grammar department. Anyway, I love the whole story, but if you want to keep it going, you could have something happen to give it suspense (Zack, Jondy, or even Logan captured by Manticore, or a complication with the pregnancy) I garantee that if you do it right, your readers will beg you for more! (I write a lot of stories myself, but have never posted them anywhere. I show them to all the people I know, though, and they think they're great, so I'm pretty sure I know what I'm talking about.) Keep up the good work!

-Eruannelaviriel

-Hannah, Daughter of David (Elvish translation)

Don't stop with the story is very good. so up the good work.

Excellent story! I was wondering though, is the story completed? Or just abandoned.

AW...
That was so sweet, but what about the baby? Is it a boy or a girl? When is she gonna have it? It would probably have logan's eyes and max's hair color and features, or the other way around either way its gonna be an adorable kid. PLEASE WRITE MORE!
YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT HERE.
Ok its 1:00 and im going to bed :oD

I liked ch.3 very nice! I just wanted to say that. Now, I'm going to continue reading.

Are you ending it here? You've started another fic and left this one dangling. If you are a writer that abandons fics, I'm afraid to start your new one.

Hey - Wake up. We're waiting for more. You know you have a lot of fans that don't bother to review.

You have a lot of reviews to just abandon everyone. Do it for yourself?

Ur storiez just get better and better! I couldn't choose a favorite chapter fromnur stories coz there all so gud! Xcept i really luv that bit earlier when max waz nxt 2 logan in bed and she pulled away, so he pulled her closer! so cute! (and i agree with the michael in boxerz 2!) I so pleazed therez a M/l author out there coz season 2 wz left on such a down for max and logan- wot wid the virus, and alec/max. I no DA intended on screening a 3rd season but it got cut off, so im really glad sum1 iz makin more happy episodez 4 CRAZY DA FANS! Keep 'em cummin

p.s- congratulationz 2 ur sis on her wedding! twaz my broz 21st last weekend ;-)

AGH i'm officially addicted 2 ur stories now! U write the stories so many people want 2 read!

u no wot- that waz the shortest story that i REALLY enjoyed in my whole life! I love Max/Logan stories Soo much, and i found this sory from the biography of 'Braty818' on there favorite story list! PLEAZE write more fluff! U must b able 2 tell from the overload of reviewz that ur storyz are so popular- WE LUV FLUFF! ;-)

p.s. I really wanted 2 put my name az MaxCale but sum1z already got that!

i like your story. it's a little hard to read b/c of your punctuation and some stuff is all clumped together but keep on writing!

I've been reading this for a while but was too shy to review. Just wanted to say that I'm pleased you've started again because I think you're doing a great job. Keep it up :-)

yay! i love it! so sweet!

please use some punctation and formatting, itis getting a little hard to read.

Love it- :):)