Reviews for Moving On
AwesomeGirl45 chapter 15 . 3/23/2017
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Rose099 chapter 15 . 6/16/2015
update
theypreferthetermpeople chapter 15 . 4/26/2014
Oh man, I've been reading frantically all morning (and unable to do my usual one-review-per-chapter because I'm on my phone). This story is dramatic and enthralling. I'm always suspicious of OCs at first, but I like Natalia a lot and I'm really curious to see where things go with Jason.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/15/2014
write more chapters please and thank you
Brallielove chapter 15 . 12/12/2013
Omg I love it! Mitch and his boys can go to hell! Update!
gymgurl26 chapter 15 . 12/12/2013
Thank you thank you thank you for updating! Oh my god that's so aweful for Natalia! Stupid Mitch and his boys! Their douche bags! I hope Jesus and Jason beats the crap out of them! I wonder what Mariana's gonna say! Please please update! I love this story soooooooo much!
Bri White chapter 15 . 12/11/2013
OMG AWESOME! I'm so glad that you updated, I've missed reading this story, I bet Jesus is going to beat the living crap out of "Mitch and his boys". Would love to see Jesus and Jason work together on this one.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Please please please UPDATE! Its been waaayyyy too long! I love this story soooo much so please UPDATE ASAP!
Nadia Testroet chapter 14 . 11/14/2013
Yay! You finally posted it! I've been checking everyday and sadly it was never updated! Please update quicker! I love this story waaayyyy to much to have it being updated only maybe once a month. I'm glad Marianna didn't get upset when Natalia told Marianna not to go out with Jason and it was cute when she wanted to go home and sleep with the moms. I'm sooo happy Jesus and Natalia finally got to finish what they said they were gonna finish later ;) I absolutely LOVE IT and you NEED to UPDATE waaayyyy FASTER!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/14/2013
liked it. was worried about Jason though cause I thought he was going to start somthing
Bri White chapter 14 . 11/14/2013
This story is awesome! Haha Mariana, perfect! Update soon please.
RL13436 chapter 14 . 11/14/2013
Really enjoying this fic. Curious if Mariana was really scared of the storm or concerned that Jason would return.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/5/2013
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Jesus is hot chapter 13 . 10/29/2013
AAAAAHHHHHH! HOW DARE HE?! UPDATE PLZ I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/23/2013
I THINK NATALIA SHOULD GO TO STEF AND LENA AND TELL THEM ABOUT WHAT HAPPEND AND LET STEF BUT THE FEAR OF GOD INTO HIM. I KNOW MARIANA WILL UNDERSTAND KNOWING THE SITUATION. I THINK JESUS WILL FLIP OUT THOUG OF THE WHOLE THING CAUSE U KNOW HE'S PROTECTIVE OVER HIS FAMILY. THANKS FOR UPDATING THOUGH.
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