Why is Gwen still a member of the team! Forgiving doesn't mean forgetting.

Sorry, I know you put a lot of work into this story, but I didn't care for it.

*beats self with a stick* this... this is just getting worse and worse. These characters have no basis in their origins, and you appear to have no respect for classic Doctor Who. UNIT... would not do that...

If Gwen did half the stuff she pulled when she was in the police
she would have been fired long ago.

Does Rhys know that the team killed Gwen and why?

I'm a little confused by a couple things you wrote earlier... 1) you mentioned that time lords had 3 babies at a time, but then only mention one... 2) Wasn't it mentioned that the Tardis was pregnant? What happened w/ that? Did anyone test her/it?

Better than she deserved!

I just wanyed to say that i like the idea of this story but there are a lot of contradictions in it, or places where things said don't fit with other parts

love this chapter! thanks

Yea poor Ianto. If John lives to even have a chance to be a god parent.

"Nearly unbreakable codes", got to love John. And weird to think that Ianto would be holding his mother.

Awh I love the Doctor part at the end

I am so loving all the twists and turns - you're an evil one, you are! This is just a wonderful story and I'm so glad to catch up on the last couple of chapters! I cannot wait to see what happens next!

GREAT UPDATE! THANKS

Omg so much is happening!

I love this story.
An immortal time baby, thuds.