liked it?! of course I liked it. smiling and crying now. It‘s such a heartwarming scene.

I didn't mean to cry... But it happened anyway

:(

This is so sad!

The grammar wasn't perfect, but you portrayed the feelings of your characters rather well and I like the story!

Simply beutiful and dammit iam crying T_T

Nooo...! Why Grampa?! Please dont die to soon, Grampa Garp...! D':

But, if Luffy already become Pirate King... I guess he... Maybe he ca- ...probably... I... (I cant finish my words! *sobbed*)

I don't know why but I'm crying. I was holding it back but when it showed the flashback, I geared up!

Beautifully written.

I just imagine myself that if Garp is going peacefully, it'll be in Fuusha.
But actually I hope he can die standing his ground as a fighter. Like Whitebeard - somehow you know :)

cool

wow, so Sad, but kinda beautiful too

Just so you know, tears were prickling at my eyes while reading this. Gah! :)

Tears were involved in reading this.