Great job I really liked the story please continue it soon

Constructive criticism: the plot is great but their are alot of Grammer and spelling mistakes. The story could also be worded better as it is now I couldn't even read it all the way through. Love the idea though

Next plis

...Boring...

So cool and awesome

I feel sorry for them they just wasted a bunch of time. Please update as soon as possible!

Please no spiders I hate spiders I hope this saga hurry's up a bit

Plz update soon and make Sasuke notice that its his friends that are on trouble.( which I know you will do in time ) haha whatever just plz update soon. (-; )((・・))

Great job on this chapter. Ha, only five people slamed their head on their desk, oh kami, I think I'am going to die of laugh from that part.

Great job on this chapter and you have some spelling mistake.

My constructive criticisms is you probably should get a beta to help you out with editing. I have found a lot of grammar errors, and a few spelling mistakes that could have been taken care of easily.

Keep up the hard work!

Yes kakashi will be unmasked

Please update soon.

Oh DAYUM, I like this. If Naruto was a boy like in the anime, then Asuma would be with Kurenai, and Kakashi wouldn't have those payback moments and wouldn't send Asuma to get the flowers, and Asuma would have never died and Maka would have never been revealed!