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That story is rated T for a reason but IT IS SO GOOD ! You should write more stories, I loved this one

READ IT ONCE BEFORE AND IT'S STILL SO FVCKING CUTE! AHDGFLAJDGFALYGVLG
Still gives my heart the same jittery feeling. Thank you! :)

i loved this do much

AWWWWwww :3
Natsu you little weirdooOO!
SOOO CUUuuuute!333
This story was awesome!33
I hope you make more wonderful stories to read and enjoy!3 :3

Awwwwwwww :3
sOOOO CUUuuuteeee!
Natsu you little weirdooo! XD X3
Great Story BTW3
*Thumbs Up :3*

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...mmmmmm... I LOVE IT! A little suprising at the end tho.

Well that escalated quickly! I wasn't expecting the moving in thing or the kiss on the lips tho.
MY FANGIRL SIDE LITTERALLY DIED! Love it by the way, and even if you did take ideas I can't tell.

I am still laughing imagining any girls and guys face this would have happened to! Best fic EVER!

haha, so natsu!

I really liked the story it was really funny especially with all the cursing words in there.

i like it
so cute 3
very creative ;)

Wait 2 year daughter how is that possible if they got together 15 months ago

Ahahahaha! Loved this so much! 333 Really funny! The ending was hilarious! Lmao

awesommmme