I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!
Thank you SO SO much for not waiting another YEAR do post. It was really beginning to annoy me.
Well...see you later!
And keep working on Soda, darnit!

Yay yay yay. O, I can't wait to read more and get the answers to all the questions floating around in my head. I love your style of suspense, very nice. Great dialogue as well. Though sometimes I have to go back to the previous chapters to remember different characters, but I like that, ya know? Anyway, have a good day.

Hmm, is this Elliot the 'Scarface El' Reno, Rude, and Elena are talking about from chapter 1? Why is Vinnie-Vin-Vin back to his old self instead of his stoic persona we know from the game? Oh, who'd he kill? The monologues about the impossible are really great and well-done, but they do seem kinda random. Why is Geleia Outfitters so interesting? OOh, did Vinnie-Vin-Vin kill Cid? Hm. The paragraph about Cid's being missed but not really was great, funny and informative. Hmm, a blond dude with a cloak? Interesting. Heheh, everyone's spiking their hair to look like Cloud's. That's so great. Man, I really want to read more now. Thanks for choosing to continue, 'cause it's a really good story. Anyway, have a nice day.

How do you do it? oo It's incredibly amazing. The wait was completely worth it. And now, for comments...

You had me fooled-; When you mentioned left arm I started to get the hint, but until you actually mentioned him I thought he was someone else. : )

Nice allusion to Mrs. Frisby and the Rats of NYMPH. _

Everything...wow...I'm wordless. I can't say anything. My brain's turned to squish. That's all I can say. God, this is -revive this! Haha-IT LIVES! Yep, that's all I have to say. Oh, right. Dialogue..wow...atmosphere..woww...mood...tone...::Eyes grow wide and large.:: I must ponder the wonder that is your writing. Another * star one from Erin. -_

erin, i love you.

~emi

another year to wait? aw man! that was cool! worth the wait i feel.

I don't know what to make of this except that's well-written and thought out. I really liked how you wrote the Turks' personalities, motives, and relationships; they seem true to me. Personally, I see Vinnie as an intellectual, but whatever. Now for my questions. Cid, at Turk? What relation does this Edward have to our dear Vinnie? Is the Rufus here the same as the one we meet in the game? - . In my humble opinion, I think this should have been posted all at once, but it's your story, and a good one at that.

y'know...i hadn't played FFVII when i first read monday...but now i have, and i can appreciate it alot more...but one thing...

WHY DON'T YOU EVER PUT UP A SECOND CHAPTER TO ANYTHING?

just a thought...

~emi

Your story is REALLY interesting so far! _ It's nice to finally find a fic that has a lot to do with the "past" part of FFVII (aka Vincent, Hojo, Gast, etc).

And you're really good at keeping the story interesting - I'm dying to read chapter 2! Plz continue your story as soon as you can! *waits*

hey, just read your story, Monday.

Any more to come?

keep writing!

My goodness! This is fabulous! O_O Your descriptions are well placed and you hit the characters right on the nose. I can't wait to see how you continue it. _

darnit rin-rin! i've reviewed this fic so many times that i had to go on OUR account to reveiw again. i want el vincente badasso! UPDATE!

~emi

rin-rin m'dear,

YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED THIS STORY! POOS ON YOU!

sorry...i just really wanna see what comes next, my little el cidyana (spelled it wrong didn't i?). no matter, just update it, k? i still LOVE your fic!

Oh.

My.

CIDFIC.

-Horrid teenage squeal.-

You do realize that you have to continue this. I'm eagerly awaiting chapter two in my mailbox. The lines about the darkness (the SWEET darkness) really got me, for some reason. And... Vincent's things are in Cid's attic! And I bet it's not because Vin was with Shera! ;)

Great job, sweetie.

This is the beginning of a *beautiful* friendship. ;) And I support you one-hundred percent.

erin! goooooooooooooooood! veryveryvery goooooooooooooooddddddd! la! you're really talented!

_~

luvs!

~emi