I can't believe I've not reviewed this! You obviously know that I utterly adore this. It is note perfect, and I love every line. Every single line. You have them down pat, my dear. All of the cares. xx

Hello! Sorry this has taken me ages, and that it is just a little review :) I just wanted to tell you though that I enjoyed reading this, even though I don't know the characters. The Mac in here is very differently written from the Mac that I know ;) You're so good at dialogue, it had a great pace and you're also really good at sudden changes in tension and emotion.

awww - absolutely LOVED this from beginning to end... :)

Loved the way she got around him at the beginning and the whole scene with the chinese in the kitchen...

Then - way to go Mac... loved it and could so see something like this actually happening...

Great job matey - a lovely read...

Thanks for posting and can't wait to read more from you.

x

Flail!
That was awesome!
Now..
I need some dirty... Need your naughty muse back :)! Tehe

very nice

Lovely! I love when a writer seamlessly transitions from arguments to banter to forgiveness. And you did it so well!

Love the wedding dress bet story, love Will finally admitting to the Obama good/Osama bad signs, love poor unsure Mackenzie wishing she could be swallowed up by the ground until Will reassures her. "He unzipped her skirt and it fell to the floor. 'Well, okay then.'" So good!

Thank you for a great read!

Cute story. It's great that they need to work on brings them home; much easier to talk and let lose. That moment when Mac realized she may have made a mistake was heart wrenching; but thankfully Will did the right thing by not pushing het away.

awwwwww! I love your writing, it's incredibly strong. So many feels. GREAT job!

That was fun... a pleasure to read at the end of a long day. The vision of Will in a wedding dress and garter put a lovely smile on my face; and the end was just sexy.

Well done! Lovely little scene - I can see them in the kitchen like that. Thanks for posting!

Don't tell my boss, but I read this at work. I couldn't help myself. Thank you so much for writing me such an awesome fic! I loved the awesomely awesomeness of it! I'll buy you loads more things for more fic. LOL!

Nice job! I love the little details of their relationship in this, how she tries to butter him up before admitting they have work to do. I felt awful for Mac when she thought she'd made a huge mistake and misunderstood him, but I'm glad he was able to reassure her so quickly.

Great job!

Great oneshot! Hope you continue to write more!

This fic was awesome. I was absolutely loving it; I had thoroughly enjoyed it. And then those last two words made it infinitely more brilliant! I literally thought "Wow! That's an excellent way to end it." Great writing. You write Will and Mac so perfectly. And I love the "the hair and the thing". It's all so them. I believe I will continue to call this fic awesome.