Hum, hum !
Bon, que dire ?
Déjà, ça fait un moment que je n'étais pas retournée sur le fandom d'assassin's creed, à cause des trop rares fanfiction yaoi plausibles et bien écrites.
Mais, aujourd'hui, tu m'as prouvé qu'on peut très bien se servir de l'univers unique des AC pour faire un très beau boy's love, s'inscrivant parfaitement dans l'histoire et où les personnages ne sont pas trop OOC, voire pas du tout.
Et, comme cette phrase est très longue, je vais te résumer ça en 5 mots : j'ai adoré ta fanfic.
Autant dans l'écriture qui ne contenait que peu de fautes et qui est agréable, que dans la façon dont tu as manipulé les deux personnages - et notamment Thomas Hickey qui était loin d'être un de mes persos préférés !-.
C'est... incroyable comme psychologiquement, ta fiction est vraie. Le développement est vrai, les réactions sont vraies, les sentiments sont vrais, et l'on assiste à la naissance d'un amour d'une nuit, d'une passion basée sur de l'attirance et de la haine.
Que dire de plus, à part qu'elle va tout droit dans mes favoris ?
Bravo, forcément. Et merci de nous l'avoir fait partager, c'était pour ma part une très belle lecture.

Et je vais finir en signant d'une main déterminée :
Saeymi, qui arrive tard, mais qui arrive quand même 8)

Bonjour, bonsoir !
Eh bien, j'avais hâte de la lire cette suite ! J'ai beaucoup aimé, même si les lemons aussi long et aussi explicite me dérange un peu, mais ça colle très bien avec l'histoire, et c'est même un peu le but donc j'ai adoré ! J'aime toujours autant ton style et ton histoire est rondement mené ! J'espère que tu nous fera encore un dernier petit chapitre ! Sinon, merci de nous avoir fait connaître ta fanfiction géniale !

Bonne continuation et je garde l'œil ouvert pour voir si un nouveau chapitre apparait comme par magie, on sait jamais !

Thank fucking God, I was wondering when the rape would end.

So Thomas Hickey, for no apparent reason other than the single-minded desire of yaoi fag, goes from being straight to bisexual to homosexual in a span of five minutes. Damn, can you say "fluid"? Well in any case, there's no apparent reason as to why they're in prison or why either man would give up his manhood and willingly fuck the other, especially since they hate each other. Oh, I'm sorry. Did you even play the game? Connor hates the Templars, but clearly, in that head of yours, it's an excellent reason for them to fuck. Alright, then.

And Connor just lets Hickey walk all over him because he's a good seme. Don't even get me started on how Connor would be the last person to do this shit, or why he hasn't scalped Hickey for being within 2 inches of his personal space. I'm terribly sorry that the game was completely lost on you; that's okay, it happens a lot with women who have had too much porn in the morning. They tend to lost their sense of self and peddle this nonsense they call romance. Sad to say that they didn't have condoms back then, and that anal sex is not healthy.

Au contraire, it's a mental illness, something which you obviously have, and something so taboo that people won't dare bring up. Why? Because it implies that there is actually something wrong with you.

Now, you say "feel free to leave comments" so long as they suck your e-penis. But if someone like me comes around, you little suckers pull the "but it's fanfiction! Waaaaaaaah!" argument as if it grants you diplomatic immunity.

No fucking shit, I know this is fanfiction and why do you think I'm flaming you for? For one, it's unrealistic and it's clear purpose is for masturbation. That's it. Second, Connor and Hickey are so OOC that I didn't read them here; I read female versions of themselves ready to get into a sex bomb cafe. They hate each other, but like each other enough to bang, which really makes me wonder if you understand what "hate" is.

Connor had a lot of it, enough for him to neglect everything about the Creed and go on his own manhunt. There's also a thing called "responsibility", but that's also lost on you since you cannot think for more than five minutes into the future. That's a sociopathic thing, I'll have you know. Anyways, you gotta love the PMSing emotions that yaoitards honestly think is deep; Hickey and Connor both act like they're women moaning over a boyfriend. None of them have any concern for their future, and why a Templar and an Assassin would even speak to one another is lost on me.

You see, you can pull the imagination card all you like, but the truth is, you don't have any of it. Your cunny is your imagination. You are unrealistic. You can't write characters properly. You can't understand the basic premise that Hickey and Connor are from two cultures - two CLASHING cultures, at that - and why Connor would ever, ever let a white man fuck him, or why Hickey would let a Native fuck him, is never explained, simply because you use the IMAGINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATION card (cue Spongebob) like it guards your special snowflake syndrome.

If you /know/ that this wouldn't happen, why the fuck are you writing it? What, you think everyone thinks with their vagina like you do? You wish, sugartits!

Now, go read a history textbook, take your fingers out of your vagina and ACTUALLY WRITE SOMETHING MEANINGFUL. Typical yaoifag; you think you're better than 50 Shades when 50 Shades and Twilight is better than this.

So let me get this straight. Hickey doesn't have women at his side for more than five minutes yet he's so willing to let Connor bang him in the ass.

Can you say, 50 Shades of Shit? I know I can. Don't think yourself any better, Frenchie, because shit is still shit no matter how many ribbons you tie around it.

Plus, you wrote: "He slowly approached HER companion" which explains everything. This entire story is about some faggot questioning his sexuality, like that matters, and this is all you can write. You can only write about cheesy, perverted homosexuals getting it on in prisons, which is ever so fitting given the amount of prison rape. I'm sure you like that too, you sick fuck, and it's obvious you support incest. Boy, what else can we get from this fair mistress?

Token homosexual assault on masculinity, making fun of someone because they're a virgin, masturbating in front of another man who clearly doesn't want it, and generally, acting like a bunch of disgusting perverts which begs me to ask WHAT they did to go to prison in the first place.

But wait, you say, IT'S FANFICTION. LET ME DO WHAT I WANT! and to that I say, Little Miss Butthurt: IT'S FUCKING FANFICTION. I CAN REVIEW THE FUCK OUT OF IT AND TEAR IT TO SHREDS. Why? Because for one, the canon isn't yours and you MUST respect it or else suffer lawsuits; and second, writing crappy prison ass-fucking won't get you any readers aside from cocaine-addicted hookers looking for their next fix.

Umm...what the fuck? Okay, I know this is in French, but the ALL CAPS, MOTEHRFUCKER of the chapters and the token homosexual antics really do make me laugh.

Connor doesn't like white people. And Hickey was an Irishman who was straight. As to why Connor would ever stand in the same room as Hickey, let alone lock lips with him, doesn't make any sense.

Well, this is what we get from yaoifags.

Mon Dieu! *o* That was sexy! S'il vous plaît, un plus!

Salut, Je viens de trouver ta fiction et je la trouve vraiment pas mal.

Eh oui, c'est encore moi.
Dis donc, ils ne perdent pas de temps ! Enfin, surtout Hickey ! Pour une fois, je ne suis pas déçue que Connor soit moins fort physiquement... :B
J'ai adoré ce deuxième chapitre ! J'espère que le prochain arrivera rapidement !

Bonjour à vous, ami assassin ! Et auteure !
Je dois avouer que j'adore les couples un peu bizarres, et celui-là me plait beaucoup ! J'aime bien ton style et je trouve les dialogues super ! Je vais lire la suite de ce pas ! :B

Jaime bien ! L'idée est sympa et l'écriture est pas mal du tout ! Sympa sympa tout ça !

Oooh ! Un merci particulier rien que pour moi ? *o*
Kyyyaaaa ! Super chapitre ! Bien qu'un peu plus court que le précédent mais sa reste un chapitre juste génial ! Les dialogues sont géniaux, je le redis mais c'est dingue la façon dont tu respecte le caractère des perso ! C'est trop bien fais j'trouve.
Je prie pour que le chapitre suivant ne sois pas trop long a poster !

Je t'aime c'est chapitre! And this couple, I ship them so hard! In fact I wrote a story with them as a couple before inEnglish and in my mother tongue.

Bon soir!

Salut, me revoilà! :) Merci d'avoir répondu a mes question!
Pour ce qui est de mes impression sur ton chapitre: je l'ai trouvé excellent, mais il était un peu trop court a mon gout, c'est dommage! J'espère que le 3eme chapitre sortiras rapidement! :D

Ah ce pauvre connor...j'ai adoré même si le chapitre était court :)
Bonne continuation

Rholala ! Quel magnifique chapitre *.*
C'est vrais ! Le caractère des perso est bien respecté j'trouve, l'histoire à l'air super méga giga intéressante ! et j'en fais pas des caisses hein XD
Si j'avais un compte j't'aurais déjà mit en favori !
Brefouille j'veux trop lire le prochain chapitre ! je tiens absolument plus en place XD