So, interesting fact! The movies did not properly portray Marcus, who was, in fact turned at the age of 19. He is supposed to look a lot younger than the movies made him out to be, which is very unfortunate. He is one of my favorite characters in Twilight and to know they did him dirty like that just irritates me. I seriously enjoyed this chapter and I love Castiel as a character/person and if I met her, I would want to be friends with her no problem. She seems like such a sweet and fun person to be around.

Please update soon xx

Lmao it does look like your going for a Kemar/Bella thing. But honestly when Cas went off after Bella told her about what Edward F*CKING SENDS~ SHE’S ME! I said the exact same thing when my best friend got her heart broke only to get back together with the man! Like I said my piece of course but I couldn’t say all that stuff to her face when she looked so happy but ugh! Castiel being saying everything for us! Love it!

I think in the face of seeing how another human/vampire relationship works and the other couples, Bella’s realizing that her relationship probably isn’t ideal. Its not a good relationship! Like in my honest opinion it’s just based off obsession. Edward couldn’t read her mind and that got him curious while Bella was totally enchanted by their inhuman beauty.

I absolutely adore this fic so I hope you update soon.

PS. Still mad at Edward for everything’s hes said since he showed up at Volterra. Like b*tch please. Get your head out of your a** cuz honey, everything coming out of your mouth is sh*t!

This chapter was beautiful! I can't wait to read the next one!

I adore this story! It’s so unique

I love how and when Castiel ranted about Edward... it's so funny! Ahhh I love Castiel and I love this story so much. Her and Marcus' relationship is so adorable I'm crying

I so approve of Bella/Kemar.

I absolutely love this story. It's one of my favorites! You do a fantastic job and I can't wait for more :D

Please do Bella/Kemar!

I love Bella kelmar! I say go for it!

Just got to thinking about Bella.. I mean she went through a traumatic experience with James with only Edward and his family to lean on. They were the only people in the world iwho knew what truly happened. They became a safety net for her and when they left so did her feeling of safety. I think that’s why she does so poorly without them. Her anxiety becomes completely out of control and she falls into depression, it’s irrational but then again so are most fears. If you think on it she was only 17 when that happened with James and newly turned 18., still very young. .. but on a lighter note I love Bella/Kemar! I believe he could give her some confidence that Edward never could and it would be much healthier.

Yayyyy! i was so excited for this chapter! I love Castiel and Marcus’ dynamics they just are so adorable together. Bella and Edward though are just.. ugh, which is why they go so well together lol. Honestly I don’t think Bella and Kemar would go well together considering that Bella and Edward are true mates, and frankly Kemar deserves wayyy better than that whiny useless brat. The sooner Bella leaves the better haha, anyways I still love your story it’s just so good!

*starts chanting, shaking her hands* Bella/Kemar! Bella/Kemar! Your Bella deserves more than Edward! Kemar would treat her well AND I would love to see Bella staying in Volterra. Cas and her seem like, given time, would grow to be best friends, like sisters!
I am honestly loving this, especially your OCs characters and how you portray the Volturi. It's so well done!
Anyway, I'll continue with my chants here as I wait for the next chapter XD

I just knew you were going to paIr bella and kemar since cas had the vision of bella walking with them
But i love the pairing i also love that your (potentially )pairing trent with leah i love leah she is badass
I also adore the marcus and cas moments they are a adorable couple and i like that you are building a beautiful friendship between cas and bella

And i love that you are having kemar becoming protective of cas and the telling of he gave bella made me think of how he felt of her in the begining to now just wow
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

nice, I like that Bella and Castiel are becoming friends, I kindof like the Bella/Kemar ship that is starting to happen XD