Reviews for The Rise of Kingman
kanademinamino chapter 1 . 4/21
Funny, although the only problem I have with it is the lack of punctuation with almost all of the sentences.
Charm99 chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
This story is hilarious haha crow is dead, I was reading Mcdinh's story and I saw that your looking for ideas for a sequel what if yusei got drugged with crimson and thought he was blackstar and went around tormenting jack aka kingman
Tigerofcards33 chapter 1 . 2/4/2018
Hilarious
My favorite part: " MARK MY WORDS BLACK STAR; YOU MAY HAVE BOUNDED ME TO THESE ACCURSED ROPES. BUT YOUR DAY OF RECKONING IS COMING AND YOU WILL GET THE JUSTICE YOU DESERVE, SO SAYS I KINGMAN!
Luna: Does he ever stop?
Yusei: Luna... in the time you've known Jack, have you ever seen him stop mid-ranting?
Luna: That's true, The day that happens is the day I stop French kissing Leo in his sleep.
Yusei: ... What?
Luna: Uhh... I'm mean
the door opened and there was a faint 'we're back'
Luna: (sighs in relief) oh thank you, convenient timing"

Yusei's favorite part: "We now bring ourselves to the suspenseful scene of our episode where Kingman tries to talk to his love interest. Will he do it? Will he chicken out? OH THE SUSPENSE
Carly: Jack? What are you doing? Moreover, what are you wearing?
Kingman: OH NO KINGMAN HAS BEEN FOUND OUT! FLEE KINGMAN FLEE

Jack's favorite part: In short: SUPER MACHO... SHORYUKEN!
Revamped Persona chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
Omg this story is amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2016
I love it never laughted so hard
Determined Artist chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Hahahaha! Funny, Poor Yusei and If you made a soul eater reference in here? Then nice and reference! (3
Foxen Fudo chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
I couldn't stop laughing!
Yusei: Blackstar?!
Jack: Kanda, can I borrow your mugen?
Kanda: Never!
Crow: I would totally do something like that!
Luna: I'm not evil!
(That's what everyone wants to think...)
WinterKit18 chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
Your story gets funnier every time I read it.
BlueSoulWriter9 chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Too funny for words!
WinterKit18 chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
I laugh every time I ready this story, so funny!
yukari.otori chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Hahaha so fffuuuuunnnnnnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyy! I lived this story! Haha I still can't stop laughing.
Amber chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
BEST. STORY. EVER!