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and I thought the last chapter had me speechless. holy shit dude...i mean i've always read stories about raph's darkness but not this level. shit.

Ahhh so cute! I CANT HANDLE IT! *passes out*

Donnie, Don't Let Leo Have Heart Attack.

Leo, Don't Let Donnie's Head Explode.

LOL OMG I FREAKING DIED! Great story! Its uh-mazing

I love how the story is coming so far. Please don't let this become discontinued. I would love to see how raph's issues come back in later chapters and how mikey deals with it. I also think that they might end up fighting only to make up a few chapters later and had a wild night. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORIES.

Seriously looking forward to a chapter or section or something from Leo's or Donnie's POV. Would love to read them going back and forth and sort of comparing notes on what they've observed and coming to conclusions.

Oh my glob I love this story!

Dude please please please UPDATE SOON!
Oh gosh I just love Mikey/Raph! That's kind of refreshing (comparing to other tcest fics I've read by other authors so far), you know? Your Mikey's definitely attractive. I mean he isn't just a baby bro that wants to cuddle, well he is sometimes but I like him being possessive and eviiil.
And when I read that 'before Leo and Donnie' line, I sort of mistook it for 'in front of Leo and Donnie and make them jealous as hell'.
Alright, that was indecent of me lol. But man that would be hot too.

Nyaaaa pensé que el fic estaba abandonado, me alegra saber que sigue vivo... Please continúe... Es lo único
Que puedo pedirte porfa

Well I breathed a big sigh of relief when I realised it was Mikey.. this could have gone down a completely different path there. Haha Mikey will take care of him.

Nice.

LOVE IT! UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER SOOOOONNN!

OH MY GOD. INTENSE!
Twelve times?! My eyeballs are bulging ya know that 0.0 ?
Man you're AMAZING. This whole denial thing is just...blowing my mind away like some mental pistol!
Love Raph's dirty talk that's soooo damn hooot!
Raph/Mike ain't my OTP before but now they gotta be.
Update soon ch19 pweeeeze!

Darn it this is so intense! Man your pretty good! I like Raph's monologue (it's very Raph), the subtle moments between him and his brothers (kinda bittersweet), those battles with the Foot (Raph's tough guy act), and of course, the hot stuff :p. I'm only on chapter 5 now and I can't stop reading it lol! I'm so happy that I still have 13 more chapters to go! You always wish that good story never ends, right?

And my God he's shot! What are they going to do! Raphie, can't shut yourself out anymore!

So. F*cking. Good! O my glob I love your work! This is one of my favorite fanfics by a land slide! Uuuuuggggghhhhh I LOVED IT! I can't even describe how happy I was when you updated. One of my fav fan fic writers. NEVER STOP WRITING!

Well... i didnt need those pants anyway. Hoy shit, man! That was crazy good. Forgot i was following this, so glad Im following this.