Anyanka born in France? Any reason for changing that from canon Sweden?

So the original Cordelia of this time Is in harmony. And quite mad.

Interesting thrust this story has so far.

Interesting direction Cordelia path is taking.

And dang. Those visions/dreams? I'm glad I read this in the morning :)

Well, you have surely I troduc3d an extremely. Op adversary. Let's hope this shadow tree isn't going to visit again too soon, shall we? :)

The last? Well, if 5hat ain't... Interesting.

And soul magic? Shouldn't actually be possible in buffyv3rese. Also, getting Marcie help is new. Well done.

Aw, too bad Cordelia won't be blinded this time.
That was one of my favorite early episodes, so much potential for the future :p

PLEASE UPDATE SO GOOD
Also, have the de la Poers win. I hate when"heroes" do genocides-this case isn't that severe,given the world will end and the de la Poers were right all along.

I miss this story so much. It's so brilliant. Is there any chance you could tell us how you intended to end it?

Interesting story. At the end of this chapter, Cordelia goes back to her regular persona. She was starting to sound too OOC

Having read more of the story my biggest critique is the lack of breaks between scenes. It can be a bit jarring going from gypsy first aid to a library scenes or some such.

How does this have less then 200 reviews? I'be only read 3 chapters so far but darn if it doesn't show promise. Just finished the first story arc and am hoping the following ones are at least half as good.

I like the premise. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling problems. Nobody seems terribly OOC to me yet and have been consistent in their characterization. I'm just kinda sad I don't see anything to critique.

So seriously, with all the bull sh*t going on when does Cordy explode from juggling all the lies she tells? Wnd when does she admit she likes Xander anyways? Not to mention at this point when she does come clean no one is going to like her. Just asking and saying.

Okay, hold on, TIME OUT! I am so confused, why does the idiot 'Xander' keep blaming Cordy for Jessie's death. I realize they don't know she tried to stop it, but really tell me why please. I mean her changing the timeline, is really of the bad. The laughter in the back ground could be the vengeance demon laughing at how she twisted the wish. Or you know, not. Since Anyanka is twisted that actually makes sense to me, that the wish would not be to Cordy's benefit. All the history from the point of Cordy going back in time and replacing the Cordy of then would have to change some what. Also this is not the reality she is from, this is a branch off from that timeline. Thus a whole new timeline would have been created to accommodate the new reality. Time travel always gives me a headache. I love this story, though.

Excellent story. You have an incredible talent for creating imagery that draws the reader in. Your horror is some of the best horror I've ever read. I hope you decide to continue this.

This was one heck of a ride. I hope you come back sometime and carry on this tale.

Getting complicated. Will this mean Kendra and hopefully Faith will become Slayers soon?
Perhaps all the Slayers will be activated sooner.