Whoa, this is good! Even if it's AU now, it's very real and just as amazing. Good job ;)

Aww...

I am on the verge of TEARS, mate! Ohmygee ...

Wow.

Goodness gracious, dude. That was some great story telling! You had such a way with words. I could feel Donald's emotions, the pain and the contained joy, even with the brevity of it all. Great observation, too! I thought it was just me who noticed how Donald and Adam look SO similar.

You're great at descriptions and handled the matter at hand excellently. I have nothing to say but bravo. :)

I LOVE this. So well written, and such a great explanation as to where the kids might have come from. And you give Davenport a lot of humanity and depth that we don't usually see on the show. This story really says a lot without using a lot of words, which I love. I hope you will write more Lab Rats stories in the future- this fandom needs more good writers!

So in this story Donald used his and the woman he loves but lost DNA to make Adam, Bree and Chase?

I just love this fan fiction,it makes me a little sad,but I just love it,good job

I really love this story and the conflict that you've shown within Donald. Great job!