Reviews for Spike's Birthday beach of Paradise |
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Guest chapter 3 . 5/27/2018 PLEAS MAKE MORE |
astralfrankie chapter 3 . 8/4/2016 Please sir. Can we have some more? |
astralfrankie chapter 2 . 8/4/2016 If it was this hot with the CMC 'teaching' Spike, I wonder what it's going to be like with Spike having some experience. |
OMG chapter 3 . 5/16/2016 Pleaaaaaase finish this |
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 2/5/2015 great |
cybernex chapter 3 . 1/5/2015 I loved this story that you spent some much time into just a bit to much detail |
WhenInDoubt-RPG chapter 3 . 12/26/2014 I love it |
Steam Funk chapter 3 . 12/21/2014 My God, this story is absolutely golden. You have no clue how much I love it, and others probably love it as much as I do. It's just so perfect! Please don't let this die! Although, there are a few spelling/grammar errors, but those are just easy fixes and were likely caused by going too fast. If you ever want an editor for this story, I can totally be your guy. But really, kudos! This story is incredible! |
UnsanMusho chapter 3 . 10/23/2014 Any chance for this story to be updated soon? |
wup5 chapter 3 . 8/30/2014 Please write more. |
Probotboyxxx chapter 3 . 8/8/2014 Cool story, hope you finish it soon. I really want to see Spike cum in AJ's pussy. |
Very Hard chapter 3 . 7/4/2014 NEED MOAR! |
DanvilleBengal chapter 3 . 6/3/2014 Spike's well on his way to have all the girls at once. And it's exciting that we have two mares coming up in RD and Fluttershy. EVen better-both mares are bi: Rainbow had admitted it, and we can imply Fluttershy is one too, because she has had sex with at least one stallion before (3 guesses to who the lucky stallion was, ...eeyup ;P ) I wonder which of the other mares are virgins. Scoots was one before Spike, and Sweetie stated to Spike that Rarity is still a virgin. For me it's a toss up between Twilight and Pinkie. I wouldn't be surprised if of Twilight, but Pinkie would be a surprise. Also I saw this on FimFiction, but it got taken off. What gives? |
Fireman Sam chapter 3 . 6/3/2014 Great chapter, keep up the good work an I hope you update soon :) |
He23t chapter 3 . 6/2/2014 Now that is so amazing I can't say enough please! update more |