Well since the website won't let me review as myself I have to say this... this fanfiction is so good it is my favorite and as the years go by I keep coming back to it I wish there was more like it considering the pairing and the fandom is really small but this fanfiction is beautiful and emotion evoking I love it so much.

the best fanfiction i have read so far

This is interesting. I like the plot so far. The only thing would be that Al's soul for Ed's arm and Simon's sight is not equivalent exchange since last time it only took Ed's arm. Also if both Simon's arm were taking, then less of Al should have been taken not his whole body, since last time it took Ed's leg and Al's whole body. So taking more this time makes sense to make it more dramatic, but not for equivalency.

You have performed marvelously and I thoroughly enjoyed it

I loved this so much. This last chapter really brought it all together...I may have let out some weird deep Jiraiya-like pervy laughter at the end but still...10/10. The joy I feel is just...I can't describe it. Thank you so much for putting in so much effort into this story.

Oh gods, finally. FINALLY! Thank you Mustang, thank you so much. That threat is over and dealt with and just...thank you.

Damn, this story is amazing.

Bro...so much changed. Talk about ripple effect! Drop a pebble in a pond and the ripples are like you'd just dropped a flippin' boulder!

Oh god it was the arc I was dreading but still...Roy is smooth and that made this a lil better...after I finished mourning.

I loved this. Loved every single word. :3

Even IF Mcgonagall was somehow captured, she'd make thdeath eaters let her go just by glaring at them. Minnie kicks ass, she wouldn't let herself be killed or tortured. *Is mostly trying to convince herself, and it's working*

Interesting story!

Imagine Roy's shocked face if Simon got pregnant? Lol~

Sooo... They should totally take the bad a** Potter Family and any recently freed house-elves that need a Wizard to bond to with them. If they only took 2-3 reproduction would've been near impossible after a generation. Without the stupid wizard laws restricting them they could be highly intelligent and useful. Just because they have to bond to a Wizard to survive and like to serve doesn't mean they couldn't be doctors, soldiers, nannies, ect.. They can be whatever they want just by having a kid master that would give them what they ask.

This is really cool! I just have one problem with this; if Harry/Simon is there, why did it not lesson the cost on Alphonse?