| Reviews for A Song Of Suicide |
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   Bloly chapter 9 . 11/28/2015 I... I'm sorry, I don't understand. Huuum... Why Tony die? What is the problem with the picture? I don't get it... Can you explain for me, please? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/17/2013 Oh my gosh. I dont even know what to say. Awesome story! Loved the darkness! But im probably going to have nightmares _ |
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 9 . 10/22/2013 Wow!1waht an ending. So was the painting the reason fro all of this. Did it make him drink the drain cleaner or was it in the whiskey. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/22/2013 Wait, what?! What a crappy ending. I hate when writers introduce something in a story and then totally flame out on delivering. Pfft. |
| DS2010 chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 wow that was an unexpected twisted end |
| rowenaaine chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 Like an Edgar Allan Poe story. Very, very good - though I really didn't see that coming at the end. You broke my heart a little. Nicely done! |
| Ladyaloysius chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 This was ssssooooooo freaking sick! I can see why you couldn't keep it in! |
| frankiebear14 chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 I like where it went. It was sad and dark, but unpredictable and I liked it. Good work! |
| intimidating chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 WOW! I am completely stunned with the ending! Maybe write one more chapter, a funeral or something for Tony? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 Not even worth logging in just to say that this ending is pretty lame. |
| patncisfan chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 Yikes...what is going on? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 Huh? That's the end?! You bring up a supernatural element, at least that's what you have the story listed as, and then never develop it? If you wanted to do a suicide story then why not do it straightforward, instead of alluding to something more sinister and then never doing anything with it? |
| juney67 chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 The story was interesting through chapter 8, but honestly, I think this was a vop out. A way to end a story you apparently lost interest in. I don't ever post negative reviews, at least until now, but was very disappointed. You need to add a character death warning as many of readers don't want to go there. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 "Fin"? This is how you choose to end it? With everything you lay out in it going nowhere? That's pretty pathetic. |
| Lulubelle192 chapter 9 . 10/20/2013 Whoa dark is an understatement! Certainly didn't see that coming! Fantastic build up and had really been hoping for something multi chapter with an explanation of what was going on ... and maybe even a happy ending. Sorry to see the story end there but I have every respect for where a writer's muse leads them and I guess the title should have been a clue. Maybe a longer alternative ending at a later date...she says hopefully... |
