no fighting ... i am glad you update but why cant she leave the wall already

Did not like this chapter.

Liked the part where Vorsannys felt unconfortable with the men looking at her when she is in an embarresed position. That is something they would definately do. Both in lore and just guys in general.

When Vorsannys claimed that Jon had no power to stop her from leaving in the morning, that was pretty stupid. Isn't Jon lord commander of the nights watch? Wouldn't he have the authority (and the manpower) to force her to stay.

Pleaae let vorsanys show westeros what a dragon warrior princess can do maybe add a jon romantic moment

Fantastic chapter! I can’t wait to read more!

I’ve enjoyed the story quite a bit, though your timeline does confuse me: Shouldn’t Jon Snow be at least 30 by now? Seems strange to call him a young man. Also, slightly concerned that you might be having a relationship between him and a 14 year old, but that’s par for the course for the books.
Best of luck with the next chapter!

Thanks for the chapter.

This romance feels a little too forced. Its as if they can't even look at each other before acting like teenagers in front of their first crush. Granted, they are youngin the books/TV show yet here, its as if every conversation has to be them hitting on each other. What made the romance between John and Daenerys was they did not change who they are. John stood up to Daenerys when she commanded him to bow and server her and Daenerys was so focused on the Iron Throne that she didn't want to compromise with him. They had their sexual chemistry sure, yet it was balanced with their political stances.

Liked the part where Vorsannys was struggling with the cold because of her heritage and background. Traveling Essos and having Targareon blood certainly won't help in the cold climate.

Did not like the part where John asked her on if he was disturbing her. He is training in the training yard. How is that in any way distracting? If he had his shirt off, sure.

"The chains tinkled... Dragon and Viserion settling on their Mother's shoulders..."
Really? The little girl has turned 3, yet the dragons born at the same time are still so small that they can perch on a human's shoulder (a petite girl at that)? Yet the GoT premise supports that Dragons become an adult at 2 years old and keep growing bigger all their life...
Are they bonsai Dragons or what?

They are so adorable together and how can relate

loved it and I cant wait to see what you will come write next.

Fantastic chapter! I’m curious to see what occurs next! Will Jon and Vorsannys get together? I hope so!

I enjoyed your story very unique. Thank you for writing

Did not like this as much as I wished.

Were talking about the princess of dragons. The heir to the Iron Throne. The woman who grew up in the most amazing structures and palaces in the world. Yet is impressed by a mostly undefended castle in the cold north. She should be pointing out just how poorly maintained the castle is because of the short amount of soldiers or the poor protection Castle Black has to a southern attack.

Did not like the letter Jon Snow gave Vorsannys. Where is the Lord Commander in the show? Where is that gruff and serious persona the Starks are famous for. He should have just gave her the book with a small note saying.

To Princess Vorsannys, Heir to the Iron Throne,

Here is the book you requested.

Lord Commander, Jon Snow.

Nothing long winded, philosphical or emotional. He said in the note that the book brought him close to tears. Are you sure he isn't a wimp?

Oh please add more jon moments maybe even the dragons can come to her

I can’t wait to read the next chapter!

Hmmm interesting so did jon and the baratheons met or him being murdered ? But i love jon and vorsannys interactions i cant wait to see them kiss