| Reviews for Your fault |
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Lexkie chapter 6 . 5/12 Do you continued this story? Is very interesting and amazing I hope you can writers more for this :) |
SupaChenz AA chapter 6 . 5/4 heyyyyyyyyyyyy! when are u going to update tis thing? |
Mystic rose chapter 6 . 3/25 In Harry’s letter to Draco don’t they know him as Raiden and not Harry |
Mestre720 chapter 6 . 10/27/2019 I still hope you’ll update it! |
redbaron297 chapter 2 . 10/1/2019 the one complaint I'm having with this story is the fact you're humanizing all non human species. you might as well have written off the house elves as human servants and the goblins as human bankers of some sort. on a minor note you're also dragging the story out too much. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/28/2019 Where Ch7 |
Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 5 . 6/20/2019 So you're just gonna have him start his relationship with Daphne as a lie. When is he going to tell her his real name? |
Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 3 . 6/20/2019 So you're telling me... that fucking MAGIC HERSELF has chosen Harry... and you say he's not gonna be really powerful? |
Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 2 . 6/20/2019 So he's going to the best magical school in the whole world and you say he won't be powerful? He's the heir of multiple houses, including Emrys, and you say he won't be powerful? What is powerful to you, might I ask? |
Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 Harry won't become really powerful? Sounds like the biggest waste of potential I've ever heard. All this knowledge he has AND being taught powerful things by even more powerful people, and you say he won't become really powerful? Why would you mix the ingredients of an OP character, all to just let it sit there on the counter instead of putting it in the oven to bake. Its gonna spoil, and no one is gonna want to read it. |
patianbann chapter 1 . 6/19/2019 did anyone else notice a huge error at the start, really doesnt matter but still their. its the twins birthday but also halloween. lol |
Tenjo chapter 2 . 5/10/2019 Now it’s all in first person but you seem to switch whose POV it is and keep forgetting to actually specify when you switch. Like the first meeting with Daphne. It switched from Harry to Daphne and back again without pointing it out. That was confusing. |
Tenjo chapter 1 . 5/10/2019 Ugh. You randomly switched from third person (good) to first person (not good). |
Marcus10 chapter 6 . 4/14/2019 I like your story but when are you continuing the story |
PixelizedGenocide chapter 2 . 2/17/2019 Snakes have spines and ribs. |