Loved it. And Jonouchi's great at the end. Nice job.

Bakura was way ooc and he would never be this abusive ever; he might cause Ryou mental pain a lot and he might slap him upside the head or something a few times but he wouldn't use weapons on anyone. He used a dagger on Ryou, stabbing him in the upper arm, once in battle city but that's all; Bakura really did care about Ryou, showing it several times.

That was awesome, I loved it (especially the interaction between Joey and Ryou), and excellent job but I can't wait to read the next one

I'm passing on a message

SOPA is back and this time all of us might be in trouble, not only might we loss Fanfiction but those of us writing fanfics are going get in trouble, we might be sent to jail for writing fanfics

anyway there is a link to the petition on my profile sign people, you will need in email but you should not be sent more then verify email thing

people this is the one thing I really need you to do, sign the petition to stop SOPA again, and start signing across fanfiction for other to do the same, Let us save Fanfics and authors, get the word out, we have until September 21, 2013

pass it on

This is nice.