Wow, that was an amazing piece of writing :) I almost never read smut stories on FFN, because they have too much vulgar language, are OOC and don't focus on the relationship of the two characters, but this... This is a definite exception. I love how you managed to incorporate details from CP2 into the story, despite it being smut. Also, Jem's character narration is perfect, and I enjoyed reading his thoughts.

Overall, this exceeded my expectations a lot, and I hope you'll write some more Jessa!

Really well written, good job!

Well, that was H O T

I like the way you wrote this. Will you be adding to it?

I approve of this. So tastefully written and captures the moment so perfectly. And yet, still hot. You should write more of them :D

I don't usually read male/female stories on here because they are usually quite crude(or badly written), but you have managed to change my mind on that as your story was Nicely written & the descriptions were quite poetic and nice :)

I'm looking forward to reading your other stories :)

Sky

That was fantastic. I like your writing style. Nicely done :)
-Prim

Beautiful!

Ugh Gidge your writing is perfection. More jessa smexiness please! I can't get enough of your beautiful writing!