WRITE ! DANG IT

Absolutely incredible story so far! I really hope that you continue it at some point! ...though it kind of funny that the chapter in which you made an april fools joke about being that last chapter actually ended up being the last chapter, lol.

Are you dead? If not continue the goddamn story. If you are, R.I.P.

Don't mean to be rude or anything, but NaruSaku and SasuHina are seriously fucked up couples. It's supposed to be NaruHina and SasuSaku, though, I read your profile and I know you are okay with both... but I'm not. Sakura sucks balls, y'know. While she does become a little competent in "Naruto: Shippuden", she still is a useless kunoichi who doesn't deserve poor Naruto. She should just fuck off and go be with the emo bastard, who I do kind of like, but not when he is put with Hinata. Really, they have nothing in common and are complete opposites. Hinata's to good for Sasuke. You should be VERY ashamed to put Naruto and Sakura together and Sasuke and Hinata together. You seem like a good author, but I don't read stories by people who like 4 things: Harems, Lemons, and ESPECIALLY, SasuHina, and NaruSaku. Sorry! Goodbye!:)

pretty good fic

next place :)

I do hope you update this one day. I can get why you wouldn't listen to me but I still hope you do. It actually has a good premise.

No offence but considering your author's notes I have to ask. In what way not for her but for the village or for the clan has she been useful? Honestly I have a rather biased view of her. An overexpecting family that constantly compares you to more successful members is high stress. I was the biggest disappointment in such a family. Yet I was actually told once that if I actually lost all confidence like Hinata did I would have literally and legally been disowned. Aside from personal experiences I find her to be a character I can like but not can you clarify for me what makes her useful compared to how you described Sakura?

i love how you said April fools on this being the last chapter but it really was the last chapter.
Was this all part of your plan?

This is awesome please update both of your Naruto stories :Element of time(my favorite although this is good two ) and Brothers in all but Blood.
Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaspleasepleasex100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 x infinity

Love their relationships so much!

I see that you're back now so will you also be updating this story

Hope you do continue this its very well written

The end is really sad. You should have continued... I wanted to see what the brothers did! But, I like how at the end you said "He begged the heavens."

"They were not listening."

Please tell me you are going to continue this please