Awww! That was so sweet. I really liked it! :D

Wow. This was awesome! So long and sweet :)
There was just one thing I didn't really like; it was kind of confusing, it would be easier to read if you separated the flashbacks from the present somehow- maybe with one of those line breaks or the flashbacks in italics— something like that.
Other than that, great work! This made me emotional :')

I found this story to be quite adorable, I have to say I'm really glad you wrote it. I enjoyed it very much.

You did well in capturing Allen and Lenalee's personalities, and I applaud you for that. The idea for this story is also very creative, and not to mention cute. The only things I found that I felt I had to mention in my review for you to improve upon, (and I apologize if someone else has already mentioned them, and I'm just being repetitive.) Is that the way you write some words distracts the reader from falling into the story, the few points I remember (and it might be all of them) are you wrote "ok", which would have helped the story flow easier as "okay", the same with "yah" instead of "yeah" and "7" instead of "seven" catch my drift? One other thing I'd mention is that when the story transitioned from one point to another, (i.e. when it went from Allen and Lenalee at the piano, to him being at the tree and her being trapped in the water.) it was hard to tell that it had happened. Although I will add for this story you managed to get away with it, because it was a dream. I apologize for not being able to tell you how to fix such a thing, as I'm really not much of a writer myself, but perhaps with it brought to your attention you might be able to improve upon that? lD I'm sorry. If I knew how to do it well myself, I would give you some tips.

All in all though, I really enjoyed this. Good work!

Omg THANK YOU your fluff AlLena story is like an oasis in this desert of Yaoi stories. Thank you seriously, I was going crazy with all the Yullen stories

This (extremely long) one-shot was absolutely beautiful! I love the themes of dreams and memories! You used both elements wonderfully, and I just can't say enough of this: Good Job! This story deserves so much more attention.

Beautiful!(':

That was beautiful love it