Hey i love this you going to continue?I hope you do :)))

please update sooooooooonnn

Good chapter!

Good chapter.

Good beginning.

I really love this story! Narra is fantastic and I love the way you've been writing this (especially in the first couple of chapters)! Thank you for taking the time to share this story on here, and have a lovely day! :)

Heey, pretty good story so far! Please don't give it up/stop it. I look forward to more.
There are a few spelling mistakes, though :P

Hoove

Àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! You updated! I love this story so much. I lost it :( iknow it sounds strange but you hadn't updated in a while and I forgot about it but I accidentally found it and I'm so happy. Please just finish it. You'll probably get more reviews the quicker you update. (Talking from experience) aaaaand I can't wait to find out what's instore for sokka and narra. (If I got the name wrong dont kill me I am rubbish with names, spelling and pancakes. I dont know why but every blinking time I mess up...or they turn into crepes)
Good luck (p.s I expect you to write/update asap!)
WLR

I hope you update soon. I really like this story.

Awesome! This is interesting; I'd love to read more. :)

Love the story and the OC! Hope you'll continue to update this.

I think Narra is a great character; I hope she and Sokka manage to become friends eventually.

The story is great so far. Narra's character is good, and I want to see how she develops over the course of the story. I hope you update soon.

I really like your style of writing and how descriptive you are. It's a really promising piece of writing, and I can totally see this happening in the show. It's also from a perspective I haven't seen before with Narra being a warrior. Oh, and I totally loved the scene where she fights the lion seal. That was some awesome writing. Thanks for taking the time to write this story, and please update soon! :)

Please continue