| Reviews for Fallen (story found in tmnt category as well) |
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Raven claw chapter 12 . 11/18/2018 Hi! , I know your busy but I gotta ask how do you write fanfic like you doing great and everyone stays in character,and I just love it . Do you have any tips how to write like a Tmnt one maybe or if possible if you got any spare time write a guide book on fanfic if you want to I mean ? |
RainbowXheart chapter 12 . 8/23/2018 Aww love their friendship Also I hope we see more intro of characters And I like Amy I hope we see her soon I hope u continue |
RainbowXheart chapter 11 . 8/23/2018 Aww Raph be your self |
RainbowXheart chapter 10 . 8/23/2018 Band camp Is that music (sorry I’m not in college yet but good luck) |
RainbowXheart chapter 9 . 8/22/2018 What cosplay!?(is it one of Naruto cosplay?) also idk how I should do an oc sheet so I copied Raven claw, I hope you like her name:Down Who Character age:16 Character gender: female Species:human If she turns into a Mutant:humanoid lizard Language:English,China , France Human appearance:she 5’ 2 tall and Dawn is a young teenager girl , Down also has bluebell eyes and medium length dark blue hair that’s let down but when she doing training, experiment or training she has her has in two ponytails she also has medium long fringe moved to the side , she also has a light skin she also slim. But the most noticeable feature is that she looks like April but different outfits/and colour shading (April is a red head , Down is a Blue head) her outfit . She wears a dark black blazer with rolled up sleeves. The inside of the blazer is a light grey , and it has black trimming. Underneath, Down wears a white t-shirt with black stitching and a dark blue rolled up shorts. And her shoes are black flats. Mutant appearance: she a slender mutant lizard who has kelly Green scales and like all lizard she has a long tail she also has 3 fingers on each hand and 3 toes on each foot . She has dark violet eyes. her outfit is a black crop top with no sleeves with medium black leggings . She doesn’t wear socks or shoes. she also has a black mask like the turtles but black the tails of her mask are long and wavy. (info about her eyes: you know when the turtles go on stealth mode and they eyes go white and Raven claw/Cana eyes red eyes glow in the dark when she go on stealth mode or when she serious about a fight in the dark. Well Down eyes are like Cana’s but instead of red they Purple.) because I had this head canon that turtles eyes go white and salamanderian/lizard eyes glow) Character personality/traits:When acting as Gio nurse, Down presents herself as a caring and supportive member of the team, even to the point of comforting Gio when he displayed he’s insecurities as being weak ,showing "concern" for other good guys/mutants. However, as Cana pointed out, Down herself is "full of lies" and in actuality cares little for anyone but seemingly a scientist, she also tends to views things like a researcher to the point of using actual individuals such as The Foot, for addition, she can be viewed as irredeemable, willing to manipulate anyone for her goals . Perhaps Down's greatest strength, however, is her cunning and intellect. Often enough, she forms complex plans that even the The turtles at times fails to counter and tends to learn from her own mistakes. she also likes dissect aliens also the mutants in the foot when they knock out. Likes: science,building Dislike:not getting what she wants,feeling used Cares for: her inventions How they would interact with mutant/humans/aliens: Mutant: she finds them interesting and wants to know more. Humans: well she was human before so she okay. Aliens:she would be star struck and ask a lot of questions about space. Kraang: she wouldn’t mind dissect them. Backstory: when she was little she and her parents moved places to places and Down first friend was April when they were 6 only thing is every one always compares them. Later on Down and her parents moved somewhere again only to come back when Down was 16. She was abandoned by her parents in the terrible streets of Brooklyn, New York. Upon being abandoned, In addition to growing an extreme hatred towards her parents,she also became heavily involved in criminal activity. She became known infamously as simply, "The Blue Beauty ", and would usually commit muggings of people in alley ways, even sometimes getting in trouble with the local Mob. Later on she tried to steal from the Shredder only for her to be left with a beating of a life time later on she did it again this time with a new invention and it work. The next day one of the foot ninja give her a letter from the shredder saying work for the shredder or pay and she agreed to make his inventions. Anything else you want to tell me about them: she has a hobby dissect things alien or mutants ( Cana and Gio always gets away before anything happens) Weapon she use as a human:her inventions , pistol,dagger ,tekko Weapon she use as a mutant:weighted chain weapon,kunai,shaken,tanto describe their relationship (I’m just picking random ones): Raph: she finds him interesting and she also likes calling him her “toy” , when it’s just her and Raph fighting . She sometimes try’s flirt with him. Leo: again she also has a hobby calling him her “toy”as well , she also likes trying or getting into his head. Donnie: she thinks there’s a rivalry going on between them for their inventions or testing their smarts. Mikey: she knows that Mikey is their light and she wants to dim it. Only for the turtles to get in her way. Gio: Down knows about his weakness his illness and she takes that as her advantage to beat him only for him to be one step ahead but does she give up no . She takes it as a challenge. But when Down turns into a now has a hobby to lick Gio across the face or side of his face because it’s gives her time to trick him meanwhile Gio is still shock , what Down did. But slowly he’s getting used to it and that makes Down angry so she tries to get in his head instead. Splinter: not much know about their relationship only thing is she trying to bring him to shredder,and take down his sons. April: used to be childhood friends , only April forgot while Down didn’t she also hates being compared too. She doesn’t find her a threat but sometimes she still remembers when they were young which makes her hesitant. Casey: she finds him cute , but hot headed Krrang: she finds them annoying Shredder:she polite and does what she has to do without question only when she not around him she calls him tincan , shredhead . Fish face:they respect each other a little because of their background . Rajah(idk if I spelt that right):spoiled brat that what she thinks of him Cana:totally opposite yet work well together, Down listens to her head Cana listens to her heart , Down is more like a brainier than a fighter while Cana is more like a fighter that a brainier. They listen to each other and they also talk trash about the shredder , when Down figures it out about Cana wants to leave the foot , Down tries to get into her head saying “what about all they’re done for you” only to fail and get a response about “well , unlike you I don’t like being used” . |
RainbowXheart chapter 8 . 8/22/2018 Sweet chapter Also why do I have this feeling when Gio and Shredder meet its when Gio is hunting him down for revenge for hurting his love ones. |
RainbowXheart chapter 7 . 8/22/2018 Gio is armour Raph is shield Donnie is the brain Mikey he is the heart Splinter is the strength Leo is the sword A true ninja |
RainbowXheart chapter 6 . 8/21/2018 Don’t fight it Leo u are adorable |
RainbowXheart chapter 5 . 8/21/2018 Too late I’m shipping it ;D |
RainbowXheart chapter 4 . 8/21/2018 At the beginning I was laughing and now I’m crying The boys are back BABE! |
RainbowXheart chapter 3 . 8/21/2018 Poor Gio but smart |
RainbowXheart chapter 2 . 8/21/2018 Only Mikey can make a situation so funny |
RainbowXheart chapter 1 . 8/21/2018 Awesome also I’m a friend of Raven claw she told me about this story and ask her ,can my oc be her friend or partner in the foot and she said yes but I want to ask permission first because it’s your story. Also I like Gio he , when you can relate too about your problems |
Raven claw chapter 9 . 8/19/2018 Omg sorry I forgot something Awesome chapter Also Cana is afraid of bugs(including spiders) |
Raven claw chapter 12 . 8/18/2018 Okay I got this question and it’s been bugging me How old is Gio is he 15 or 16 What colour is he(the turtles have different shade of green on them but what’s in his dark or light or somewhere in the middle ) Is he taller than Donnie or smaller then him. Also awesome chapter I hope to see another chapter (seriously your awesome!) Also love the characters (their stillcharacter and |