Sharks... *shakes head* ...why is it always sharks? Get creative, people! Torture by hungry cockroach, maybe. Or wet cat. Or homework essay. Why do villains never think of that?
(Also, it's ear ring with no space. Earring. Earing looks so incorrect.)

Gru didn't trust Lucy's acting abilities?
(...maybe that's fair. She's a little too...over-the-top.)

So I guess that's the answer to my question?

Note: It's getting a little irritating how you keep spelling Gru's words how he pronounces them. I get that you want to show his accent, but how many words in English are pronounced the way they're spelled? We all know what Gru sounds like; you don't have to illustrate it for us. Maybe just when he pauses or something?

That's really sweet! I like how you're showing Lucy's Mom Potential to the girls here. (Now, how long till they mention it to Gru?)

Aaaww!

I always thought it was a shame you never finished this; it's easily as good as "Despicable Days." I like the focus you put on the girls, Margo in particular (something the movies should've done more often). Margo being left-handed is a nice touch and a good nod to her treatment at the orphanage. Also, teaching his girls how to use his guns is just the kind of responsible/irresponsible thing Gru would do. XD

I like how Lucy waits until Mr. Ramsbottom has left before arguing with Gru, instead of exploding while he was still there. It's the kind of thing actual mature adults do when they need to hash it out with a significant other, and it adds a touch of realism to the story. (not that Lucy is all that mature or anything ;)

-RisanF

Please continue, this is literally the best fanfiction I have ever read! I made my own fanfiction based off of yours, don't worry I gave you credit, and I need to know what and where to go with my story, please?

Also turns out shrink rays wear off quickly.

I love this! I wish you'd update.

More please?

This is a pretty good fic. I wish you continued it.

Your beta let you use 'seen' instead of 'scene'. You should dock her pay. You also confused Chloe and Zoey in spectacular fashion; Edith tackled Zoey's mom and pinned her to the floor! That's pretty impressive for a seven-year-old. (And dock her pay some more.)

This story looks good so far. One question: How can the girls not be sisters? They are different ages, and an orphanage would group them according to age. Why didn't they? Also, older kids like Margo and Edith will usually find younger kids like Agnes annoying. And you see it a few times in the movie. But they still do everything together. Why would that be the case if they are not really sisters?

Ohhhh please update this! Please! You are an awesome writer and you portrayed every character so perfectly - I really enjoyed reading this! :D

OMG *-* poor Lucy! I am genuinely afraid for her!