The fight with Dohnaseek was so repetitive and redundant...Dohnaseek is outmatched but he wont unleash his full power but as soon as he learns Naruto is a Gremory he did? What is the logic? Not to mention the carelessness with which he handled Kalawarmer allowing her to be rescued. Just overall arrogant and low class is how I would describe Naruto in the fight with Dohnaseek.

This is just sad. The whole story is sad. naruto easily overpower everyone and you make it a poor, weak nobody. Delete this shit.

that's not really true Narutoverse is strong onoki picked up a fucking island sized turtle and in the the naruto one shot the moon

Good work) pease update soon)

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Naruto is pathetic if he died and become a ducking devil bitch

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Sigue

This is good. More original then some other story's like this one and it had a legitimate and highly likely naruto reaction to it-with him becoming a devil, his obliviousness, loving ramen more then a female and the trouble he gets into. A little over the top with the 9hr chase between naruto, Azazel, and war god but it's your story do as you like, looking forward to the next chapter.

nice job

Hope you decide to update your fics soon

I was actually looking forward to this, and then Naruto failed on the promotion over something so fucking stupid. After all the bullshit in his world that made him not get the promotion he deserved EVER, to fail over that is just too much. Can't read.

Awesome story I hope you continue

this was a great chapter. please keep up the great work and please update soon

Why have you abandoned such a great story?! WHY?!