Thank you so much for sharing Rabecca's story with us. She and her peers eventually bonded and that's all that matters. This fic reminds me of a friend of mine named Courtney who had CP. It's really a realistic portrayal of the disease. Well-done :-)

Oh my absolute goodness, This story was amazing! I love our style of writing in that you don't just blatantly spell out a feeling, but delve into the why's and how's of it's existence. I really do hope you finish this someday, the storyline and writing is absolutely brilliant! The way that you portray every character with meticulous attention to detail? I tip my hat to you. Also, I love how you integrated both the magical world in England and in America. Again, this was marvelous and I hope you are able to continue this someday. :)

Lovely writing style and creative idea.

I believe this was your best yet. Please continue!

You used some awesome adjectives!

I thought that the language used in this chapter was lovely.

Yay! Another amazing chapter.

Long and detailed- just the way I like it.

I thought that the title of the chapter fit perfectly.

Another great ending!

Your words weave a wonderful plot.

The last line was brilliant.

A truly excellent chapter.

The detail in which you write makes a great deal of a positive difference to the story.

I felt as though I was transported while reading this.