That was awesome!

I really loved how you wrote Wally and Dick's interaction. The dialogue feels natural and the friendly banter made me smile through the whole second chapter. I also adored how you wrote Bruce as a concerned parent without going overboard with it.

Wally is such an awesome friend to Dickie

Amazing! Love it. Very In Character. I especially like the banter between the two boys about Wally's "kiss of life." That made me laugh out loud. Very clever, very realistic, vERY nice. Especially the bit here Wally bumps into something. Silly boy.
Looking forward to reading more of what you have to offer. Write on!

this was awesome thanks!

Heh, love the friendship! :D Awesome

Lol. Super awesome little fic you've got here! I loved it, it was super intense!

I love this!

lol i loved it both thrilling, scary, and adorable thumbs up

Great story, it had a good mix of genres and was well written :)

Awwww, nice friendship here. "Kiss of life" lol. I'm gonna use that! ;)

Lol

Another great story to add to your repertoire and its a Dick and Wally friendship piece. I like how you wrote Wally in this as he felt very in character. Some nice fluff to wind down the drama too. I'm really enjoying your writing style.

I love it! Good story :D

HAHAHAHAHA! Oh dear, laughing so hard! Oh, Wally, you little nincompoop ;D
In all seriousness though, AMAZING job! Covered grammar, punctuation, spelling, and of course, plot!
Keep up the STUPENDOUS work!