That was one of the most beautiful stories I read. Heres a Monk fanfic challenge for you. What if Trudy had survived the bombing.

This is beautiful. Sorry about your Dog. We had to put ours to sleep. Sucks, doesn't it?

Thank you for expressing what I couldn't. It makes me think more now on the after effects of losing someone very close. Heartbreaking.

I had been through a similar situation and feel excatly the same, at a loss of what to do, you want to clean the place up straight away to give you something to do, you keep thinking about 'what ifs'...

I am very touched by your thoughts of how Monk would have felt.

The way you write it puts me in Monks footsteps, which is usually how I like to read.

Very touching story. The imagery is great, and it really helps us to empathize with Adrian.

Wow! Very powerful. First-person stories are always some of my faves because you really get a sense of what the character is thinking. You did an excellent job portraying how Monk would've felt after Trudy's death.

Great introspection! BTW, thanks for your kind reviews on my story, 'Miles to Go'; glad you like it!

Awwwwwww! :-( ::sniff, sniff!:: WAAAAHHHH! Poor Monk! That was well written. An interesting peek into Monk's thoughts...

I read this on your website-It's really good!

-RianaRogue