Reviews for Ohana is Forever
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 1/17
What a cute story with a fun beginning. All the grumbling and irritations that plagued them when they were young was so fun to read. I do like the premise. Family/Ohana is indeed forever. Thanks for sharing!
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 6 . 1/5
Wow, I feel so sorry for Sakura
This misunderstanding is almost painful, but at the same time, it's nice to see that Sasuke didn't just abandon her for no reason
I really hope this training exercise ends well!
story magic chapter 5 . 12/29/2017
I really hope more is coming, I love this story
Can't wait for the next chapter
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 5 . 5/18/2017
This is the third time I've read this fanfic!
That the most times I've ever read a fanfic!
I absolutely love this!
It's one of my favourite fanfics!
If only there were other fanfics out there like this!
It's so well written and its about team 7 bonding and it's AWESOME!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
wildtrance chapter 5 . 3/28/2017
This is good. I enjoy it. The next exercise should be locking them in a room with no weapons, chakra dampening seals, and loads of stuffed toys. They can snuggle, cry and throw them at each other. They can also just brutalize the toys. It would be carthardic.
RalyksKunoichi chapter 5 . 2/28/2016
This fic is great! I'm excited to see Sakura get her ass out of this and hopefully kick Sasuke's ass for leaving her behind.
Bubblekins1010 chapter 5 . 2/23/2016
Jeeze Sasuke, you're a real jerk aren't you. Well you know what! Sakura is going to be stronger than you at this rate! So there!
Anyways, good chapter, I re-read the entire story, and I'm excited to see what's next! .
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 5 . 2/22/2016
Yayyyyyyyyyyy! You updated! I love this chapter. Its good to see Naruto get some process with Sasuke and I hope Sasuke eventually sees reason. I also like Sakura in this chapter. She's devolving even more. Again I love this and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
JEM0013 chapter 5 . 2/22/2016
Yay! I'm glad you're back! Being patient is haaaaard~!
I loved the angst that Narutos going through and I love how you made him lash out at Sasuke! Can't wait to see what happens next!
MonkD.drgn chapter 5 . 2/22/2016
Sweet, I love a good team 7 fic. Their relationship really was the best part of series.
Reynard the Fox chapter 5 . 2/22/2016
You're welcome. I'm glad I helped give you motivation. I know I have a hard time finding that myself. XD

This was a good chapter. Technically, having flashbacks from two other characters that aren't the POV character seems a little weird when I think about it, but I think it works out just fine here. I loved this chapter, and it's interesting to see Sakura pushed forward a little earlier than in canon. It's really a shame we never got to see their regular interactions between Wave and the Chunin Exams.

Also, on the technical side, you had some thoughts (the little voice in the head) in single quotes here, but double quotes in the last chapter. You need to find a single format and be consistent with that, since inconsistency can confuse people.

Personally, I'd just put those in pure italics with no quotations, since they are essentially thoughts, and that's how you have all the other thoughts formatted.

Also, another little thing I noticed while re-reading chapter 4: There's a part in...scene 6 I think, where Sasuke and Naruto have lines of dialogue in the same paragraph. That needs to be fixed so they are in different paragraphs.

I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 4 . 2/16/2016
Dude you need to get back on this. Its so awesome and I wish there was more fics like this out there. I love the whole story of this fic and I love how we're looking at everyone's flaws/pain and how they are getting to know eachother more and how they are becoming teammates.
Reynard the Fox chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
This is such an interesting story. I love seeing Sakura break out of her shell, and I love how she and Naruto are getting to know each other better. Actually, I'd love to see all of them bond. Sakura and Sasuke would defintely be interesting to see.

I know it's been a long time since this has been updated, but I really want to see this completed.
regretmemo chapter 4 . 12/12/2015
PUPPY!
Mystery Day Dreamer chapter 4 . 5/17/2015
very heartbreaking...
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