Hahaha! I really enjoyed this one-shot. It was very well-written and adorkable. I love these two so much and I wished that they got together. I haven't watched season 4, but from the clips I've watched on Youtube, like in the Symbiote Saga episodes, it seems like Peter and MJ are beginning to show hints of something . . . since White Tiger seems to have been out of the picture for a long time. Please correct me if I'm wrong.

I loved how Peter joins Ava and looking all formal and debonair. I also love how they're pretending to be a couple, yet they aren't and they're falling with each other and genuinely expressing their love for each other . . . which, in turn, causes them to lose their targets, much to Ava's frustration and Sam's enjoyment.

Again, a great story. I hope you'll do more in the future. Thanks for writing this and for sharing this with us. We appreciate this.

Noctus Fury

AWESOME. I love the twist at the end with sam

I am dying with laughter right now! Perfect ending!

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I love it! It would be awesome if you continued.

Plz keep writing this.! It's really good!

XD Oh my goodness Cx Sam, you are going to get it x) Gosh, I loved it! Too bad it was a one shot :/ I'd definitely read it if it was longer, though Cx

The coolest story...

Pls update

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Pls updafe

Make more

Please continue

I love the way that you write Ava's feelings, it is so real.
If I had to pay for the rest of this book I would do it in a heart beat.

I think that it is great that you have already showed Peter's and Eva's feelings for each other.
"It's so good, so good"