Loved it! Thanks for making!

AWWW BEAUTIFULL! I hate that Donnie was like a robot in the series when nothing seemed to break him, no matter what he went through. He was strong. But he had to break down at some point. Thank you for this! I LOVE IT! SO SWEET!

If donnie was pinned to the floor with heavy water pouring down onto his face, he would have drown in minutes. Why is raph always trying to drown Don? Is that his answer to everything? Brilliant and touching story. Raph really needs to become a nicer brother tho. Lol. I wish the cartoon had been more like this.

This is very heart-breaking with a side of sweetness.

Brilliant, need I say more? X

I feel so bad for poor Don putting all this blame on himself it's not healthy oh yeah and RAPHAEL he is in so much trouble for nearly killing Don

This was so good.

Really nicely done, I enjoyed reading it a lot.

I think you did a great job explaining the turtles' realistic reactions to Donnie's obsession. Donnie resisting his brothers' help at first was very in character. :D Nice work.

Aww... I love the twists in the story! The 'discipline' Raph gave Donnie, the *squeals* brotherly fluffy goodness and of course, finally, the story itself! :D

This was perfect. I really wish the series had looked just a little more into the aftermath of the incident- there's no way Donny could have felt responsible and not have it affect him or the others.
Really well written, and it was a nice touch that you remembered to include April and Casey in the dynamic- they're family too:)

-G