Gahhh. I rarely feel sympathy for Snape, but I must say you played his section so well. How misguided he was in trying to get Lily back... and how she says she can't save him now, which is so true, because if she could've somehow, he never would've sought out friendships with Mulciber and others in the first place. And then in her part where she states how maybe there isn't anything to fix at all, and that's the point, isn't it? Snape had her in the palm of his hand, even if it was just friendship at the time, but he couldn't resist the Dark Arts regardless.

I WILL EAT MY CHEESECAKE DRINK MY TEA AND CRY OVER THIS JUST ANOTHER DAY IN THE LIFE OF ME I CAN'T KEEP LIVING THIS WAY BUT I CAN'T STOP THIS IS PERFECT I WILL CRY SOME MORE AND READ SOME MORE AND BE HAPPILY SAD AT YOUR BEAUTIFUL WRITING

oh my god (again) this made me feel lily x snape things, sad things. which is highly unusual so that just proves how great you are. anyways, this was amazing, as usual and you are amazing, as usual

Reminded me of Silence in the Library / Forest of the Dead.
And of course I liked it. I liked reading most of your stories, though they are somehow heart wrenching even when they aren't. I'm just a masochist who loves the feeling.

Love love love love love3
In case you couldn't tell, I love this :D

Beautiful story, loved the idea of the fireworks in the rain and how the scenery description plays with your story and kinda follows the characters' mindset, especially knowing this story takes places in the UK ;) Your James is really well-written! Love, 'camel in distress' on tumblr :)

This was beautiful :) Loved it!

Beautifully written. Well done.

I would marry this story, jsyk

This is really good!

Wow! This is absolutely wonderful. I loved how you wrote every single sentence and the kind of "old nostalgic feeling" it gave to me. Just brilliant.

This piece is amazing. Your words flow together so beautifully and I love the imagery you've used here.

This was beautiful. I loved the symbolism, the tone and the general vibe of the piece. It was wonderfully penned down. Great play of words! It had me hooked till the very end. Great GREAT job! I loved it. Brilliant work. If you could just fix the narrative a bit, this will possibly be one of the best Jily fanfics I have ever come across!
I loved it so much!

Absolutely wonderful as always. You were true to each character and kept the reader hooked all the way through. The only thing that I might have changed is some of the brief forays into first person narration. It kind of upset the flow (for me at least). But again, fantastic storytelling!

This flows beautifully and you're writing is amazing. I love this so much :)