Awesome story you should make a squeal

wow, i didn't think you would like pokemon! This was very well written! It was just so freaky that Brock and Jesse were an item! This is really twisted and orginal!

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BTW, what happened to your sailor moon/nutcraker story? I love reading that fic almost as good as your Chronus Trigger/Secret of Mana x-over. Chow!

NOOOOOOOOO! It can't be! It would have been a lot cooler if Jesse actually married Brock! Oh well, I'm not the author. Bye now! [Cool, story]

that was so sweet passionite dramatic and I LOVE IT!

Cool. I'll finish the rest later. Bye now!

Wow. Never thought of Jesse with anyone other than James. Neat story! Poor Brocko...he'll find someone, someday...or not. Heh. It's weird...today I watched the episode where Jessie was forced to work with Brock, Ash, and Pikachu. Coincidence? *gets a weird look in his eyes* Okay, maybe not. Again, great story, looking forward to more of your stuff, Jade!

~ Nate, who should really finish some of his Pokemon stuff, too... ~

I like it so far :) & I thought the 'mini-adventures' part was really cute :) & who is this new pink haired girl? I guess I'll have to keep reading :) Cool so far :)

Very good story.

awwwwwwww! i loved the ending!

ooooooh Jesse is so nice now! *beams*

eeeeeeeeeeeep! No Jolteon! *throws out her Marril* Water Hurricane! *a big wave of water surrounds Jolteon, crashing on him, making him faint* Yay! You go Marril *high fives her pokemon*

oh no! Make Jesse be good NOT bad!

OMG OMG OMG!

OMG! what's gonna happen!

coolies! Go Rhyhorn! *cheers*