I am all caught up and I can't wait for more! I like the idea of the shadow being a spirit of vengeance too. You have made it work well in this story. I also like how you have balanced the action with character development.I think you could do a lot with the Shadow having to go back and forth from Lamont to Margot. It might soften the shadow to their relationship.

I find it interesting that The Shadow does not call her Margo. Like he is trying to keep his distance by using her full name.

I love when Margo show some fight! I also like all the historical details so far.

Back to catching up with the story,

I thought it was a cool therory. This was a good chapter great job.

Great ending buddy I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great job buddy this was entertaining.

Conflicting feelings are always interesting to read about good job.

Ah love so complicated especially for heroes great job.

Tension is rising great work can't wait for more.

I like how you have Lamont and the Shadow as almost two different beings in one, it makes him more mysterious :P

Good enough I liked that bit about trusting people at the end.

Great action packed chapter very epic I can't wait for more.

Good job once again buddy keep at it.

I like it! Do keep it up, this is fun, and really good!

Hey buddy I thought this was a good one. Shadow is a manipulative sob. XO seriously though great job.