So Great!

bro... this was soo fucking beutiful and the fact that you just ended it thier pissed me off so much, can you atleast make a part two where you tell us how they were found plz plz plz plz plz plz plz its just sooooo goood pleaaaase do a part 2

Its Reyna Avila Ramírez-Arellano not Reyna Cato

If posiden faded like you said then he would have gone to the void not Tartarus as Tartarus is for immortals who are killed but don't fade but you said posiden faded so he would be in the void

Mind your language bro, good imagination though

Good story line, very good imagination

IS VESTA'S WEAPON A BURNT MARSHMALLOW ON A STICK? BECAUSE THOSE HURT IF THEY DROP ON U. That would legit be so cool man. thx hrt ly

This is fantastic i have just started reading this and i love every bit of it, keep up the great work

Wow what a complete and utter pile of garbage you wrote for this chapter. Like you just got tired and shit on your own story. What a prick you are. Fuck you. You’re a worthless sack of shit.

Damn, Now thats how you write a story

Coemncbbdbshsjsjdjhd u are gud writer

It ends how I imagine? Ok then it ends with the author of this piece of rotting filth dying after a long drawn out lonely and miserable existence filled with nothing but pain and hardship.

Hmmm happy ending now. Percy kills every primordial and chaos, rewinds time, makes all the gods mortal and with all his power he sets a ward around the planet that prevents dieties from existing on earth. Allowing humans to rule themselves instead of being at the hands of retarded powerful beings. Much better ending then this piece of shit.

8/10 until you permadeathed Poseidon. 5/10 when you permadeathed hades. -10/10 for Reyna, Vesta, and this half assed pathetic ending. It’s obvious you put no effort in. Just threw it on, likely when you decided you were bored and wanted to quit that particular plot. I had thought you were a fairly decent author up to a point, but nah, just another scummy piece of shit to be blacklisted.

I have no respect for people who knowingly make false promises. None. Enemy or ally.

Was Percy’s resolve pressure not diamond hard? Kind of stupid to say he needed more. He had already sworn to do all that. Repeating himself makes him seem weak.

Very good. I'm not gonna review each individual chapter that's very tedious and to be frank kinda petty. Anyways very good job I really enjoyed this read.