I would love for there to be another chapter.

Omigosh. Love it~~

I have one request though... do you think you would be able to make this a first chapter and continue in the second chapter?
I'm really curious on how the rest goes... (I haven't watched Free! yet...)

Overall, loved it to ends of the Earth.
~~Yaoifangirl~~

Really nice! I enjoyed a lot. Thks

nice

i didn't think this was rushed at all. i liked this overall. considering how far the anime was at the point this was published, i think rin and haru were both really ic. my only suggestion is that you incorporate more showing rather than telling in your writing. otherwise, i enjoyed it. nice job!

Oh God XD

Gahhhhh my feels! I love this so much... Like Rin was so rough, and it was so believable like that. And Haru was so adorable :D. Great fic!

awwwww

THIS IS AMAZING I ENJOYED EACH AND EVERY BIT OF THIS FANFIC! IT'S SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE! 3

this was really cue and I love the ending. I wouldn't mind if you made more though. c;

Hey, Jade! Your story/ff was totally awesome :)

There aren't many story's that can make me comment them aloud(while reading it) But with yours I went on a 'thought trip' lol Like when Rin went away and Haru got ready to swim.. I was going "Dude, you have like shark teeth marks and probably hickeys all over yah, just saying." and Mako's sentence made me exclaim loudly "Told yah!" (which made my roommate wonder with whom am I talking to)

Anyway... If it wasn't clear before, I really enjoyed it and will look forward to read some other ff storys from you. Keep up with the writing.

This was a great story in my opinion; I love this couple as well! RINxHARU FOREVA!

3 Spirit

SO FREAKING GOOD

it had me breathing heavily since the moment Rin was introduced. very well written! the dialogue matches their personalities well which isn't too common in fanfiction (unfortunately). the ending (with makoto spotting the hickey) was perfect and funny. I liked that it was short and fast-paced. as a whole, loved it! thank you! (‿)

Oh ... Oh hell yes. This is a fantastic piece of art! Great work! Well done!
XD
Poor Makoto XD
TAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

Yay Yeah this fic was fresh 8) lol and I love the ending XD poor Mako chan