how come every body adore sevas when they're scared of him also

you need to tell the explanation of events inside the story, not on writer comment

what, suddenly sevy afraid of his bro. you need to slow down and explain events more

you know, your character is very confusing. haha

I am so confused, how old is sevy and sevas? sevas lived in the closet so I thought they were a child. and then you said 15 years old sevy and he knows Lucius. I am so confused

How do you write so well? You're story is filled with details and that stuff. Keep up the good work :)

Why not give an email address on your profile where a reader can send a corrected/beta'ed chapter done for you. if you like it post it, it you don't ignore it. Some of us like editing but don't like the pressure of being a formal beta! Please update soon. It has been years.

You've got really fascinating idea of this story. Please continue .I've been craving for more.

Hmm, purring really. I hope this won't be some annoying uke Harry. sick of that especially when it's harr x someone to he should be top. either way time for bed

Interesting. hole he fixes his personality faking his personality will be damaging to him

damm that's sad. Still not liking how hes acting like what the baby brother used to be and not himself before he came to this world. Well maybe he will change to himself slowly. since I don't want him going nuts just cause

Hmm hope this is actually Harry x tom. I despise uke Mc and idiots that don't understand top x bottom yet our the bottom name first. how hard is it to understand comment sense. either way enjoying it so far

PM sent about fixing grammar for you.

I am in love with this story, I don't know why you stopped writing but it's none of my business. is there any chance you would be willing to continue this story.

Everything looks alright with me. You are doing better than most.