Reviews for Total Drama Manor
Issamel chapter 17 . 8/2/2014
I guess I'm kinda confused. I get you are rebooting your story but does that mean you are completely scratching this one so you can start over? If so I'm a little against that. I think you could put some cameos in there if you want to spice it up a little but this is so well written that it wouldn't need it. I think you should just keep going with what's already been written. It's ultimately your choice I just thought I'd voice my opinion. Feel free to PM me though if you have any questions or comments about what I have written here. : )
CommunityFan27 chapter 18 . 7/31/2014
So are our OC's still in the story, or are you replacing them with TD cast?
Thedaffodilqueen chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
Name: Estelle Carmin Milatta

Stereotype: The Individual

Personality: Estelle is a loud, carefree girl who can be descirbed by one word completely- unique. Estelle is definitely unique. She is a tall (6'2"), talkative girl who can talk off your ear if you let her. She's opinionated and sometimes thinks her opinion matters the most. She always has something smart or sarcastic to say and isn't afraid to say it. She is also very blunt and when she thinks of something, she just says it, good or bad, which can be good or really, really hurtful. Estelle is a natural born leader and will lead if she can, however, this has also caused her to be bossy and somewhat smothering, but, on the other hand, Estelle is extremely funny, witty, and an entertainer. She's always thinking about, talking about, or eating food. She blames this on her fat days (when she was around fifth through eighth grade, she was a pretty big girl, and she called herself a BAFA or a badass f***), she'll constantly reference to her BAFA days, using this as an excuse to do weird or crazy things. She's also really loyal to her friends, and she'll never talk about them, but if she has an enemy, she's kind of a b*** to their face.
Just for reference, Estelle uses these phrases a lot: "Well, I used to be a BAFA, so I can do this." "Ah, shnizzlesticks!" (when she messed something up) "Sweet Mary Mother of Joseph!" (when she's scared) "Hot diggity damn, son!" (when someone else messed up) "Ugh! My pathetic excuses for legs can't do this extensive amount of work, yo!" (when she's running or doing some sort of strenuous work) "Holla! or What up?!" (when someone calls her name) "Oh sweet baby corn!" (When she's upset or stressed)

Age: 16

Fear: Trucks and needles

Body type: She is tall, 6'2", lean, 126 pounds, and flat, 34A and no butt whatsoever

Hair Style and Color: She has dark green hair in an A-symmetrical bob with right side-swept bangs that go right above her right eye

Eyes: She has wide, hazel eyes

Skin: She has sickly pale skin

Paired up: Sure

With who?: No clue (lol)

Casual clothes: A crisp white T-shirt, blue skinny jeans, and black boots

Formal clothes: A sleeveless black dress with a white belt going through it, it comes down to her knees, black shorts on underneath, and black and white ballet flats

PJ's: A purple tank top and black shorts

Swimsuit: A purple and white striped bikini

Talents: Cooking and writing
61817 chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
Name: Carrie Johnson

Stereotype: The Bubbly Musician

Personality: Carrie is really bubbly naive and innocent and will fall for mostly anything . She shouts out random things and can't keep a secret if she's under preassure. She's kind and energetic and probably will act like she took 20 energy drinks. She is really honest and hates it because she'll say your awkward and she won't care. She's also outgoing and annoys most people she meets.

Age:16

Fear: Rats, Getting lost in the middle of nowhere, and being alone for to long

Body Type: Skinny short and slim

Hair Style and Color: Carrie's hair is Coffee Brown slightly wavy and held in pigtails.

Eyes: Light Brown

Skin: Tannish

Do you want to paired up?: If so, With Whom?: Someone who's fun to be around

Casual Clothes: Carrie has a pink shirt with Blue skirt overalls with pink flats

Formal Clothes: A white fluffish dress with black flats

PJ's: A pastel blue shirt and grey shorts

Swimsuit: A pink bikini with a loose light blue shirt over it

Talents:She can play the classical and electric guitar and sing but she doesn't think her singing's good

Audition tape:"Hey my names Carrie and I would Really want to be on this so I can make some new friends and gets some money and Kitties and unicorns and I want to touch a rainbow" *Carrie trails of and giggles and then turns the camera of*
The Queen of Cold chapter 18 . 2/21/2014
Name: Xavier Summers
Stereotype: The Inventor
Personality: Xavier is very smart but pretends not to be so that people are more likely to trust him. He can't keep a secret to save his life and loves to invent things, though he would never admit to it because he's afraid of being ridiculed.
Age: 19
Fear: Heights
Body Type: tall and lanky
Hair Style and Color: black and messy, always looks like he just got out of bed
Eyes: hazel
Skin: sun-tanned
Do you want to paired up?: Sure!
If so, With Whom?: Anyone who's interested…
Casual Clothes: long-sleeved button up shirt, black trousers
Formal Clothes: blue vest suit
PJ's: plain red boxers and a black t-shirt
Swimsuit: lime green board shorts
Talents: inventing, pretending to be dumb
Audition tape: "Hey, so uh… I'm Xavier, and I'd really like to be a part of this because it's a great way to meet new people and stuff… I dunno. Thanks, hope you let me in!"

Name: Quinn Gordon
Stereotype: The Mean Performer
Personality: Quinn is confident and works best on her own, when other people can't bring her down. She doesn't need anyone's approval and doesn't care what they think. She's a bit of a trouble maker and pretends to be nice so it's easier to manipulate people. She's a strong, independent woman and is honest and very blunt with people. She doesn't trust anyone, especially nice people; they always have something to hide.
Age: 17 (soon to be 18)
Fear: Birds
Body Type: 5"4, skinny, small bust
Hair Style and Color: wavy, shoulder-length, light brown
Eyes: blue-grey
Skin: pale white
Do you want to paired up?: Sure!
If so, With Whom?: Any guy deemed incredibly attractive (she's pretty shallow)
Casual Clothes: purple t-shirt, short black skirt
Formal Clothes: short, strapless black dress, tight bodice, skirt flairs out
PJ's: blue silk nightie
Swimsuit: pink bikini with white polka dots
Talents: singing and acting
Audition tape: "If you're looking for drama, I'm you're girl. I like to stir up trouble and I'm in it to win it. We're here to make money, not friends."
Clockwork Princesss chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
Name: Ridley Ladair
Stereotype: The Rebel/Bad girl
Personality: Ridley doesn't like to be bossed around, resulting in her breaking the rules. She emits a slightly bad girl vibe and is pretty care free. Around friends she is more playful/flirty and teases a lot. Ridley can be a bit unpredictable and likes excitement, whether it's a party or ditching school.
Age: 16 turning 17
Fear: She is very claustrophobic and hates being confined. Tight spaces and large crowds make her feel like they're closing in on her or crushing her.
Body Type: Slender with long legs
Hair Style and Color: She has long dark auburn hair that frames her face
Eyes: She has wide dark brown doe-like eyes
Skin: Neutral
Do you want to paired up?: Sure
If so, With Whom?: A guy who doesn't mind her rebellious behavior, cute, can make her laugh, can live a little, and is a bit like her
Casual Clothes: Ridley wears a loose grey Pink Floyd shirt which is tucked into high waisted black shorts, sheer black tights, black combat boots, and gold stud earrings.
Formal Clothes: A strapless midnight blue dress that has a sweetheart neckline. The top hugs her upper body and slightly sparkles while the fabric waist down flows to her feet. She also wears black heels
PJ's: A loose white Rolling Stones shirt paired with black spandex shorts
Swimsuit: A strapless floral bikini top paired with black bikini bottoms
Talents: Ridley is extremely persuasive (often getting her way), very flexible, and is a very agile and fast runner.

Audition tape: *Ridley is seen jumping over a high wall surrounding the school with a group of laughing teenagers*
One of them laughs and turns to Ridley and says, "Did you see the teacher's face when we jumped out of the window and ran off?"
Ridley nods and grins,"Yeah, her look was priceless! Oh hey Total Drama people. The names Ridley Ladair. I'd like to be part of your show, it seems like loads of fun. I'll be sure to make the show more...interesting. Anyways, see you soon!"
*Ridley and the group of kids hopped into a black cadillac driving off to who knows where*
(static)
Roronoa Zoro Ultimate Badass chapter 17 . 2/21/2014
oh yeah i almost forgot their both 18 and Kyo can sing and play guitar and leon is a natural at sports
Roronoa Zoro Ultimate Badass chapter 18 . 2/21/2014
(if anyone is wondering why I'm sending this in just wait and see)

Name:Kyo
Nickname:none
Gender:Male
Romance:Sure with a girl who is nice and won't stop trying to get him to open up or a girl that has a troubled past like him
Sexuality:Straight
Stereotype:the nice guy with some trust issues

Personality:he never lets anything get to him, he always keeps a cool head and thinks about a situation and how to fix it. he's also nice but he has some trust issues so its hard for him to make friends.

Likes:horror movies, playing his guitar, and rock and metal music
Dislikes:liers, cheaters, backstabbers and people who think there better then everyone else
Fears:that he'll never be able to trust anyone and/or make friends
Appearance:he is pale, muscular, and has black medium length hair with red dye and blue eyes
Clothes:a black jacket with a blue shirt underneath, blue jeans and black sneakers
Pajamas:black shirt and red boxers
Swimsuit:black trunks
Formal:black tux

Audition tape:"my names Kyo and the reason i wanna join is to make some friends i guess also I've got nothing better to do plus some of those challenges looks like they could be fun i guess"

Name:Leon
Nickname:Leo
Gender:Male
Romance:sure with girl who is nice and fun to hang with
Sexuality:straight
Stereotype:the tough nice guy

Personality:a very laid back person,he never lets anything get to him, he always keeps a cool head and thinks about a situation and how to fix it. he cares about his friends so if they are having some problems he's always there to help he's also tough so he doesn't mind doing dangerous things just as long as there not to dangerous.

Likes:horror movies, hanging with friends, and having fun
Dislikes:jerks, bullies and small spaces
Fears:claustrophobic
Appearance:Pale with a slight tan, muscular, and red eyes
Clothes:a black shirt with flames, black jeans, and red and black sneakers
Pajamas:red boxers
Swimsuit:blue swim trunks
Formal:black tux

Audition Tape:"Hi my names leon and id be awesome if you picked my for the new season of total drama I'm sure id bring lots of ratings to the show because I'm sure i can handle anything you've got for me."
Issamel chapter 18 . 2/9/2014
I think the relationships and friendships are developing quite nicely amongst all the characters. I like the idea of any of the cast of TDI making appearances, especially Noah, Izzy, Heather, and Duncan. Then maybe like a few other select villains. Can't wait for more! :)
SPACE MAN OH SPACE MAN chapter 18 . 1/10/2014
Cool to see your planning on continuing this story. The last chapter was fun. I think it's really cool that Tom is a Captain. With Perrie he's in an excellent spot until the merger. Omar and Logan are still fun characters as well.

I think the best way to come up with challenges is think of all the different locations you can use for a haunted castle. You've already done the scary woods and a creepy maze so there are a lot of other places to work with such as Cellar, Ballroom, Graveyard, Attic, Laboratory, Crypt, Conservatory, Underground Caves/Lake, Catacombs, Storeroom, Old rundown Gymnasium.

This kind of a story I think the more out there and bizarre, and potentially monstrous ex competitors would work best like Izzy, Ezekiel, Dakotazoid, Mike, Dawn.

I think the romantic relationships are fine so far, you've got Blake and Jenn, Tom and Perrie, the Jax love triangle, and then potentially Craig and Jasmine. I also like a couple of the non romantic relationships/friendships there are in the story, particularly Sakura and Logan, when she apologized for him in their introduction and during the In The Woods chapter when Logan literally grabs Sakura and carries her away from the beast, I really liked it. The dynamic between them, the honorable female warrior, and the uncivilized big fat mountain oaf, it just lends itself to entertainment.

Keep up the good work, and I hope you can continue this story sooner rather than later.
Photographer of Faith chapter 18 . 1/9/2014
i love the voice actors for it and the fact that you'll be starting this back up!

I'm thinking maybe for a challenge, they'll walk around in the mansion with the lights off and the contestants on each team pair up and find a chest while battling their worst fears, and one of them have night vision goggles (* means that they would be the ones with night vision goggles the others will have a key to keep through the challenge until the end of it. Except for Rio who has to keep track of both). So like the Soured Squids: Blake* and Jennifer, Jasmine* and Henry, & Felix and Craig*. The Boney Bats: Kaylee* and Jax, Omar and Tom*, & Clara and Perrie*. Then the Lunatic Leeches: Elizabeth and Sakura*, Logan* and Maria, & then Rio* by herself (since there was an odd number)

Then for guest stars: Heather, Courtney, Scott, Duncan, and all the other villains would be making these contestants' fears come to life in that challenge

And I love the whole Blake and Jennifer relationship blossoming and I've loved the Kaylee and Jax relationship
DEDEBUG9 chapter 17 . 1/8/2014
OMG YOU UPDATED. OMG. This chapter was great btw :)
SPACE MAN OH SPACE MAN chapter 16 . 9/5/2013
I'm excited to see how it plays out, keep up the good work!
Photographer of Faith chapter 15 . 9/2/2013
It be so cute the next time jenn gets scared,she holds onto Blake then realize what she's doing then quickly let's go
Switch - On - 97 chapter 16 . 9/1/2013
Great Chapter keep it up man
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