Good lord Idk if I can keep reading. Shes being a child! Leading him on and being a huge part in his rebellion, she turns around and is suddenly scared of commitment? What about that whole scene in that room when she told him she wanted to be together and nothing else mattered?
Now that he rebelled and decided shes flip flopping cus feelings are hard?

Please finnish this story its amazing and im so hooked on it

I like protective Mel. I'm glad someone is there to stand up for Sammy. Not that Sam is incapable, but I think usually by default Dean wins because he's older. It's nice to see Mel defending him despite the fact that she also is dealing with the pain of Sam leaving too. She's such a good sister.

Also, Sam and Dean do need a good go-between at times and who better than Mel? haha. I also love the fact that Sam helped Mel back onto that bridge. Again, the sibling dynamics are excellent. Again, Dean and Melody's relationship is written very well and it's clear that there is a bond there. You write them just like actual siblings! :)

I love Mel's addition of "morons" to the "bitch" "jerk" thing. It warms my little heart! haha. And way to go Dean, way to get you and Mel into trouble! haha. He just couldn't help himself. So, I feel Mel's "i hate you" was completely justified...not that she actually hates him but in the sense that one says such things to a sibling.

Again, I love your pacing of the story. You do so well with it! :) Also, you're weaving Mel into the story perfectly. This is another fabulous chapter from you, my friend! Thanks for sharing! Hope this one finds you well too! Much love!

Hey there, friend! I know it's been a while since you updated, so I'll leave you some reviews. :) I hope it either brings you some inspiration (should that be what you want) OR at least brings a smile to your face. So, here we go:

I really enjoyed how you jumped right into things with your fic. The diary entries were an awesome idea! They give us an insight into Mel's mind before we even jump into the supernatural stuff. We get to know how she thinks and what she thinks about those closest to her. That made jumping into the "present day" stuff that much more rich because we already had some background to Melody.

Dean and Melody have a special relationship. I really enjoy the way you wrote the two of them trying to break into Sam's. Just like bickering siblings! It was perfect! :) I also love how fun it is to read Mel mixed into things with Sam and Dean. Your flow and pacing are excellent. She fits into things seamlessly and I love her witty retorts. She's a girl after my own heart. haha.

Again, I know it's been a while, but you truly have something special with this story. I'm sorry that it never quite got the response that you would have liked. This story deserves better and more from the readers. You deserve to hear what a great job you're doing with your story. And while I know I can't make up for it, I truly hope you do know that I appreciate all the hard work and effort that I know went into wriring this. Your love, care, and attention to detail clearly shines through your wriing and I love your writing style.

Thank you for taking the time to share this with us. I know how hard that can be, sitting there waiting for a response and not getting one. I will keep going through your story to try and leave you some more thought-out reviews-because you truly deserve them. (Although, I can't guarantee they'll all be reviewed in a timely manner. haha) I have always loved your story and you are an inspriation to so many more. Your art (or in this case writing) matters, friend! I hope this finds you well!

Much love!

For me Bill is in reality God (aka Chuck Shurley) in other look.
And I think Melody is the new creation of God and probably the Firdt and Only. So, she's not a Nephilim (a abomination for Angels) but something different. And, Michael and Lillth seem to be informed who Melody's in reality.

Your fiction is super ! I love Melody :)

XOXO

Was it Gabriel or God? I'm thinking God/Chuck

This is a great story, I hope that you can update soon!

Okay, so this took me awhile to review-partly bc I'm behind on all my fics, and partly bc I spent so long squealing, and then partly bc I had to gather my thoughts.

Cause like...you're speaking my language with this chapter, I swear. Soulmates having a supernatural explanation? Energy exchange having tangible results and consequences? /More angelic history and lore/? More like THE SHIT I LIVE FOR.

Also: despite the gaping black chasm where my heart is supposed to be, I definitely squealed over Melstiel in this chapter. I'm totally picking up what you're putting down with the last paragraph. And of course I LOVED the Winchester babies!

I think the only thing I would request is that you make like a masterlist of Gen2 Winchesters on tumblr, cause it got kinda confusing trying to keep everyone's name-parent-faceclaim-birth order straight.

Other than that, this was nothing short of a delight. I can't wait for more Knight of Heaven/Angel stuff and more Winchester babies, and I ESPECIALLY can't wait for the twins!

I feel like Melody has been lacking substrate - or her own plot - up until now and I really hope that with Cas here now she'll get some. Sure, I believe that the nephilim thing is a very nice idea but I feel like she isn't making an impact - like, if she were gone there wouldn't be much left other than her brothers. Now, I know that as an awesome writer you will give her the plot she deserves! Keep working!

Omg, so many new characters, the next generation! So I'm probably jumping to too many conclusions, but if Melody, Olivia, Castiel and Dean are their aunts and uncles, then are Sam and Devon their parents - I'm so psyched! And I feel like such an idiot for not catching on about that dream, but I can't wait to find out

Awesome chapter as usual, can't wait for more!

I know it's probably already revealed who bill is, but I'm guessing anyway! I think it might just be god. The way he talked to melody is very fatherly, and obviously bill isn't her 'dad' so I'm just going with God at the moment.

Btw I'm so in love with this story. Update please! I'd hate to come to the last chapter and be in agonising pain because I'm waiting for the next one.

Seriously though, brilliant writing. Awesome plot, and really good characterisation !

I love your story, and I'm gonna admit to some stalking right now cause I looked up your tumblr and what I could find of Carry On on it. And there are two people I'm completely in fucking love with on there who I haven't seen in the story yet-I'm nuts about them no joke, I basically fist-pumped when I saw your story on your tumblr-and a few more who I like a shit ton who haven't appeared either. Anyway, what I'm trying to say's I love your style, and the little character bios ave me super-pumped for wherever you're taking the story next!

Wow, "Hi honey" I practically squealed, their whole first meeting was crazy good

Melody's reaction when Sam caught them was just amazing