I hope you're okay and I hope you come back to this story its really good!

In my previous review, of this chapter, I said it would be nice if Atem appeared...but then I realized you snuck him in after all.

How thick can Jaden possibly be, to mistake him for Yugi, when he's both dueled alongside and against Atem (and presumably Yugi told him about Atem at some point during the Bonds Beyond Time movie)?

Now all we need is a Thief King Bakura appearance, and I'll be a very happy duelist (unless of course, you've already killed him off).

I'd give you bonus points if Atem appears in this story and by some miracle actually recognizes Yusei/Jaden...but I can see why you wouldn't do that.

Amazing!~~~~

Nice job on this story.

Oh this story is really great! I can't wait for the next chapter! XD

Lovely! :D

I love this fic! Your characterizations of Juudai and Yuusei are amazing, and your writing is so good in general! Please, please keep going with this fic, as it is so captivating and exciting! I hope to read more in the future!

Does this mean they are leaving Egypt but still traveling? Or is stardust dragon here to get him out of this situation but not this timeline yet?

I am so glad to see this updated!

yay stardust! 3 thanks for updating! I can't wait for more and see how Judai reacts to seeing Stardust doing his job aka saving Yusei :P

I'm excited about your fanfic, I loved it!
The story is excellent, I'm very curious about what is going to happen.
Now that Stardust has appeared, I have great expectations.
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On the other hand, I'm excited that there is a fanfic with starshipping, I shouted every time someone said "boyfriend" or "flirting", I feel that Judai and Yusei make a good team, as both have great skills.

Yay! Stardust has appeared! Now to meet up with Judai and figure out more of what's going on. Little Atem was the cutest, most helpful kid ever. Helping a stranger find his friend, so sweet! I'm getting more and more curious how this is all gonna tie together. The slow burn is good at continuing to build bit by bit too, I may just explode when something fully sparks between them. As always, thank you for writing (and updating so quickly!) Can't wait for more!

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/dies of excitement

Baby Atem is so cute and helpful! I hope next chapter is Stardust breaking Yusei out and everything just crumbling around Aknaden. Not logged in because I'm on mobile.