| Reviews for The Apple Fell Far from the Tree |
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2017 That was awesome! |
Whiz-n-Whirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2013 Wow! Bravo! That was amazing! I really love Zuko and Sokka buddy fics and this one was great! Keep up the good job! |
Data Seeker chapter 1 . 7/11/2013 Hi Nice little one-shot. There is some good quality, good narration, interaction, dialog, emotion, humor and curtness. But some areas need work. I suggest you get a Beta Reader. The basic character portrayal is good, but some of the dialog feels OOC. The basic story with Zuko having fears and doubts and Sokka trying to calm him comfort him was a good story. But some of the depth and details need work. The wholesome standards are high. The language is clean. Nothing is suggestively offensive. No extreme violence or any other vile content. I hope this review brightens your day. God bless. Data Seeker |
Willowdove chapter 1 . 7/10/2013 Dwah Zuzu being angsty and KYA |
Zelda rules chapter 1 . 7/10/2013 Aww, sweetness! :) |