all good

hey just a heads up, the new chapter is messed up a bit.
good to see ya back though

Ahhh! I'm so glad you updated this! :)
I feel the tides turning for them! ️

This story made my day! I'm glad your still writing and sticking with this amazing story... it's one of the best ones I've read! I really hope you overcome your depression, just remember you have all these people who love what you write! thanks for the update and I am so excited for the next chapter! :D

For some reason, there's a bunch of source stuff jumbling up this update. My poor brain can't hack it!

Good to see a new chapter but what's with all the numbers and stuff?

I am loving this! :)

My heart is breaking for her! Ugh, Ulfric is such an ass!
Your characters are totally on point, I'm excited to read more!

awesome story please make more like this

I've finally managed to catch up with this story! You have a gift for writing, honestly, it's some of the best I've read and catches my attention quick; every sentence is incredibly well written (I'm actually jealous XD) and flows nicely.

Just a brilliant fic. Well done! c:

This is one of the best skyrim fics I've read! Ralof is one of my favorite characters in the whole game! What's amazing is that my dragonborns name is luthien as well! Have you read the silmarillion?! I was so happy to see that her name is luthien! Make sure you keep up writing because this is only only quality fic with ralof and now I'm hooked on the characters!

A year already... I feel as if you should've updated on Friday, though. With the Special Edition coming out and all that. It would've been appropriate heh. I've been replying it lately and I can't help but want to actually complete the main campaign now. I eagerly await your next chapter~

I love the story, read the whole story up to the update and now I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great work

I was horrified when I reached the end but overjoyed when I saw how recently it was updated! Just started reading this yesterday and I have devoured every chapter! The choices for Ralof stores are far too few and it's even harder to find a good one like this! Following the story for sure and can't wait for the next update!

Very good story, is there going to be a new chapter soon? If so I can't wait