Reviews for ELEMENTAL DARKNESS
Primarx chapter 8 . 5/9/2019
great story. hope u will continue this story. as for ideas
1) MC and co can play with canon villains , for example trolling akatsuki members by parents deciding to teach children how to prank ppl. similar thing with anko and orochimaru. also, different daimo and kage reacting towards them.
2) naruto's summon contract. does he still has it? some unexpected consequences him being an undead. becoming sage. getting new contract with something unusual.
3) ending up one way or another in another world like canon helsing or in dc/marvel universe to harass heroes , eat some villains.
4) develop story about what kind of school their children will go. u can add children from 2 other pairings as well like 4 (or more) of them becoming ninja or going to yokai academy (Rosario vampire)
5) MC chance upon twilight characters and troll/destroy them.
6) creating an undead faction in DxD universe
7) some kind of enemy attacking your version of helsing universe. u can just take them from other worlds.
8) if protestants and Catholics can have a special order , why orthodox church can't? introduce them and some kind of chaos for MC family to play around in.
XenoLucifer chapter 8 . 9/18/2018
I really don't think you need to continue it much further, perhaps a reunion with the hellsing org but other then that there isn't much else. Now one complaint I have is that your Author Notes are not in bold text. Makes it difficult to see where the actual chapter starts sometimes.
matthewrister chapter 8 . 9/15/2018
I would like to thank you for writing NO LIFE QUEEN AND THE DEMON NINJA, it was the first Fanfiction that i ever read and i can't wait to read more of your fresh work
Guest chapter 8 . 9/9/2018
Naruto takes his family to the land of spring for a vacation
TechnoGalen chapter 8 . 9/9/2018
Seems like a company that didn't pay their bills, either way at least you're okay man and if you can get back in it soon my suggestion is a royal beatdown on the a-holes of Konoha.
The reaper of death445 chapter 8 . 9/9/2018
Thanks for telling us.
Panzer1580 chapter 8 . 9/8/2018
Welcome back and best of luck.
linx007 chapter 8 . 9/8/2018
Well for however brief a time it may be welcome back. Good luck IRL
TechnoGalen chapter 4 . 8/15/2018
Robin had ended his life because of his retard and non caring doctor who prescribed him the wrong medication.
453 chapter 7 . 8/6/2018
when it will continue
Monster King chapter 7 . 6/13/2018
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/19/2018
this is fucking awesome
BorderLand chapter 7 . 3/9/2018
Madara and Obito will end up as the diner. Kaguya? Well, she might be shared with the family.

Now honestly they don't stand a chance, Killing Morgana and Naruto are as OP and immortal as someone can be.
matthewrister chapter 7 . 12/6/2017
what would happen if Larry from this chapter meets Might Guy and rock lee while they were hugging
HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 7 . 11/26/2017
That's the government for you, as for the story I'm glad to see it being continued.
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