This is magnificent! Kudos to you for executing such a minute detail so artistically! I love your language: it's so fluid in its simplicity. Well done! Instant favourite!

I love how you write! I can feel and see the characters whole being in the way you write. You give them such depth and inner reasoning and I will forever profit from and enjoy the way you write John Watson. Thanks!

God. I think I love John more than life itself.

Beautiful.

Very nice! ! !

Beautiful piece... Loved it )

Loved it! It's the little things that make a person and a story. I love using the small details as well, yet I never caught how John's handshake had changed. Excellently done.

You have such a lovely way of entering into the internal worlds of these characters, via the seemingly small, almost unnoticed details. And yet, when I think back to the episode I realize it is all there, in that scene. In your writing you truly are a "conductor of light," with an impressive ability to infer the depths of character from the subtle clues.

You are an amazing observer of detail! It blows my mind how you are able to turn detail into character! :)

Very good. I hadn't really noticed that before.

This was great! Very well done.

wonderful, wonderful character study. i like that you chose mike stamfords pov here.

Go Mike. Nice to be able to sleep at night knowing you saved two men. Well done character study,

Fantastic job on this, thank you for writing it :)

Unassuming perfect word to describe Stamford. Who must somehow know what he is doing introducing those two. I really like your slant on it: It's clever! :-)